Oh. My. God.

This... has got to be one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. And no, I'm not just saying that. The way you wrote Esdeath is so unimaginably intense and amazing. I never expected a writer to write her like this, and from what I've seen from the show so far I didn't imagine that she would act like this. This story proves that Esdeath is a full-blown yandere (in my opinion at least) and is clincally insane. This story is so unpredictable that I have no idea on how it'll end. The grammar could always be better but it's good enough that I take this story seriously. Another positive thing, you make the POV's the reader wants to see the most longer, while the side ones are shorter. (For example, Esdeath and [Name] as a primary POV and Kasumi as a smaller one. I am honestly inspired by this and I'm thinking of writing an Esdeath X Male Reader over on Wattpad.

Bacem

Seems like we're nearing the finish. I'm excited for the next update.

God bless and be safe man. We will wait for those updates.

Well good to see you back and was nice to read into this story again can't wait to see the next chapter.

I thought you were dead man lol im glad you came back to update the story!

UPDATEE PLEASEEEEEE

This is awsome

Great

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERRR PLEASE UDPATE SOON

Keep up your great work

ohhhhhhhhh Esdeath what are you think ? mhmhmhmmhmhmhmhm?

Hey mate stay safe and God bless. :)

Esdeath was just waiting for the kid to mess up! And the girl dumb, Name told her the woman’s nuts, Esdeath said it herself and it toke half the empire to burn down to think. “Huh, I fucked up.” Smh girrrrrl you dead now! Crazy gonna torture ya punk ass. Name going to take 4 chapters before he saves you.
So play some sweet but psycho on the radio while ya at it.

Name better to get his bleeding ass over there afap!

Looking forward to more!