I liked the way you described every detail. It was pretty good!

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Well... that went in a completely different direction than I expected xD All of the years I've loved MLP I've never thought about ships within the fandom however I quite enjoyed this. They aren't a pair that I would have thought to put together romantically but, after reading this one-shot, it certainly works extremely well. I loved the story, you wrote it extremely well with wonderful descriptions and captured the essence of the girls characters wonderfully. Great job!