Nice start. I'd love to see more.

That was rather on the short side of things, so I can't really say much about the story. I am a bit worried that you're going with Galra!Keith in this story. While I've seen some pull it off, others have not, and there isn't much depth in the first chapter. Mostly though, it's just missing something that I can't put my finger on.

Hey, I got the first review! Well, here goes: Yaayy for kallura! And possible bonus alien Keith! Looking so forward for more!