Reviews for The New Warrior
Nostalgia critic chapter 2 . 7/3
Spiderman ate butt
Mite3 chapter 30 . 4/28
Honestly thought it was a cool concept, but it was poorly written in the beginning, and i lost interest 5-6 chapters in i believe. By poorly written i mean, how tf did peter just enter kfp and not be freaked the fuck out when he realized they were actual bi pedal animals. Secondly, and i think lastly, when he got chosen as *A* warrior, it didnt even show the interactions of him and the five afterwards. Like wtf, where the hell was that at in the fanfic? Am i just blind and didnt see it? I dont fuckin know!? Lmao well anyways it was, well, interesting to say the least. Peace out bro.
Thanatos 2018 chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
haven't even read it yet and I can already tell that the plot thickens...….
Laureen Alpha Reptilian Queen chapter 30 . 10/24/2018
Please more updates, so awesome story!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/13/2018
It’s with great power comes great responsibility.
The Story's Shadow chapter 30 . 8/27/2018
Given that this is another reality, I don't think Ava's powers would work considering there isn't a Tiger God in the Kung Fu Panda universe...I think. I think Tigress would have the upper hand, she's had more experience than Ava and has fought several enemies. Ava's fought a variety of foes, it's true, but she hasn't often faced an opponent with Tigress's skill. It'd be a hell of a fight to be sure, but I'm not sure Ava would win that one.

Peter can be quite the asshole sometimes, he enjoyed what he did to them...kinda sadistic.

(I don't mean to nag you about some of the things you write, I just feel like some of it is a bit...off considering the characters. Shifu should've beaten Peter, Peter should've become a spider immediately and stayed that way, there should've been no humans in this reality...I'm sorry if this makes you mad, that's not my intent.)
Guest chapter 29 . 7/2/2018
Could you please continuse this story
SebjectCrimsonStorm chapter 1 . 4/11/2018
"Peter will not be turning into a spider...yetAuthor
I don't know how to feel about this...
Reid hinds678 chapter 7 . 12/26/2017
How about Mia you know mixed martial arts
The Story's Shadow chapter 29 . 2/11/2017
Good luck with whatever's going on. Things happen.
LionKingIsAwesome chapter 29 . 2/10/2017
Damn
LionKingIsAwesome chapter 28 . 2/2/2017
Cool! The Lizard is almost here, and you've even included hints at Peter learning Inner Peace later on! Well done! This chapter was a great one! I can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring. Until then, keep up the great work, man!
The Story's Shadow chapter 28 . 2/1/2017
This was...not sure what to say...that's not bad, just surprising.
Jestalnaker94000 chapter 28 . 2/1/2017
Good chapter! I can't believe peter got a split personality with his spider side like The Hulk and Banner. XD Anyways, see ya next chapter. (:
lost-in-elysium chapter 12 . 1/24/2017
I enjoyed this. My favorite part was when Peter caught Tigress; I can definitely see that being a turning point in their relationship. Great job!
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