Reviews for Smile
twilight sparkle chapter 4 . 11/27/2017
UPDATE THIS STORY AND LOVE ME THE SAME! ITS BEEN TOOO LONG! OVER A YEAR! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
twilight sparkle chapter 4 . 9/29/2017
Update please! ! And here's another idea! What if Dawn pins Red on the ground? That'll be cool and Ash, will...walk past them! Muwhahahahaha! And the teachers too!
Muwahahahahahahahahaha!
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twilight sparkle chapter 4 . 6/20/2017
Is your hibernation over,? I want updates puh leaaaazzeeee
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twilight sparkle chapter 3 . 5/28/2017
Hey why don't you make ash a transfer student at dawns college and he joins their group and dawn recognizes him from high school hope this is good enough
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twilight sparkle chapter 4 . 5/28/2017
Plz update plzzzzz *gives you big green puppy eyes that's about to cry*(hey that rhymes CD)
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R-tem chapter 4 . 1/4/2017
I know I shouldn't judge so early in the story but where's ash, I taught this was going to be pearlshipping. but if there be any sudden sespense or drama I would kindly check back regularly but till then. I can't read this. and what was that ending all about.
R-tem chapter 4 . 12/6/2016
Please put ash in sooner ,i'm a big pearlshipper and this chapter just seemed like a big filler.

and hopefully you're not making this a 30 chapter series. but if it is please make it interesting and dramaish, I like those kinda things
tigersfan52 chapter 3 . 11/13/2016
It's JOHN CENA! Jk it's probably Ash or Gary.
Dawn Ketchum chapter 3 . 11/5/2016
Oh! A Raticate or a Pikachu!
kingofclan chapter 3 . 11/4/2016
what about broken hearts pulled together with strings of musical notes?
mignonjoli chapter 2 . 10/9/2016
Finally! It is here!