Reviews for Smile |
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twilight sparkle chapter 4 . 11/27/2017 UPDATE THIS STORY AND LOVE ME THE SAME! ITS BEEN TOOO LONG! OVER A YEAR! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! |
twilight sparkle chapter 4 . 9/29/2017 Update please! ! And here's another idea! What if Dawn pins Red on the ground? That'll be cool and Ash, will...walk past them! Muwhahahahaha! And the teachers too! Muwahahahahahahahahaha! Love twilight sparkle |
twilight sparkle chapter 4 . 6/20/2017 Is your hibernation over,? I want updates puh leaaaazzeeee Love twilight sparkle |
twilight sparkle chapter 3 . 5/28/2017 Hey why don't you make ash a transfer student at dawns college and he joins their group and dawn recognizes him from high school hope this is good enough Love twilight sparkle |
twilight sparkle chapter 4 . 5/28/2017 Plz update plzzzzz *gives you big green puppy eyes that's about to cry*(hey that rhymes CD) Love twilight sparkle |
R-tem chapter 4 . 1/4/2017 I know I shouldn't judge so early in the story but where's ash, I taught this was going to be pearlshipping. but if there be any sudden sespense or drama I would kindly check back regularly but till then. I can't read this. and what was that ending all about. |
R-tem chapter 4 . 12/6/2016 Please put ash in sooner ,i'm a big pearlshipper and this chapter just seemed like a big filler. and hopefully you're not making this a 30 chapter series. but if it is please make it interesting and dramaish, I like those kinda things |
tigersfan52 chapter 3 . 11/13/2016 It's JOHN CENA! Jk it's probably Ash or Gary. |
Dawn Ketchum chapter 3 . 11/5/2016 Oh! A Raticate or a Pikachu! |
kingofclan chapter 3 . 11/4/2016 what about broken hearts pulled together with strings of musical notes? |
mignonjoli chapter 2 . 10/9/2016 Finally! It is here! |