your story is nice i can't wait for a new chapter i love this story

Are you planning on writing more for this? G

This is freaking amazing! I love it so much, please update soon!

Please continue the story it's just so good and I want to know more about Kuro's first Eve. Please don't give up ~.~

Ahhhh i love this story! The writing style is simplistic yet descriptive and the plot is A, the chapters are a really nice length and it was a great read! Don't worry about OOCness, the way you write them is very accurate. The story was really good and i can't wait for more~

dood. this was freakin amazing! had me crackin up! I loved it, and I cannot waaaiit until the next chapter! You've got some seriously amazing skillz in writing!

Their interactions were adorable this chapter! And putting Mahiru's friends into the story, too, I always like to see them make an appearance. Ryusei and Koyuki seriously need more screen time. The woes of being a minor character. Could you imagine if one of them turns out to be World's Eve? Like a recent sort of thing, not while he was over in Italy, heh.

But anyway, back to the story! Your dialogue for Kuro and his speech patterns, I really liked the way you went about it. And the bold black for the inner Kuro, that's a good idea! I can't wait for the next installment ) Good luck with your writing for 2017! May we have many more updates from you 3

The image of Kuro sleeping on Mahiru like that skldjks why is that so cute and now stuck in my head. But wait! He did take care of his bite, right?! I swear, I worry about that child. He cares so much for others, but I often wonder if he forgets to take care of himself in the process. Another great chapter! I am sad that I only have one more left ;_;

Oh man, Kuro's line. Asking if Mahiru was in any kind of pain ... killed me. Ahhh, the emotions in this chapter were vivid and pervasive ;_; I've never wanted to give a fictional character a hug so much. And nice choice of name! It could even be why the other Eves are called what they are, because Kuro started the tradition! Headcanon accepted. I like it very much.

The bond between Kuro and Mahiru, may I just take a moment to tell you how much I enjoy reading the way you write it? This chapter! Ahhhh, I don't know what to say. Other than: wow, the way you write the inner darkness inside Kuro? I like it! And the way the whole thing played out ... nice job!

I like the way you had that memory play out! His first Eve, huh. That was a neat idea for a happy memory to give to Kuro and I hope and pray he did, in fact, have an Eve before Mahiru. If only for him to have more happiness in his life ;_;

I am all for the friendship aspect for these two. Just give me all the platonic KuroMahi feels. But lol, that line. "We only need one Servamp that strips!" That was priceless. Thank you for that.

More bonding moments. Ahhhh, the conversation they had and Kuro not saying anything because Mahiru seems to like cooking. Too cute! The way it derailed into darker territory fits with how canon plays out and how Kuro has said himself that he is hiding many things from Mahiru.

But ... what in the world happened at the end there?!

I'm sorry it took me so long to start leaving reviews! Last month was crazy. But now on to how much I loved this chapter! I was originally going to wait until the end and leave a big one, but Kuro helping Mahiru make dinner because his hands are shaking?! Well, I had to stop right there and take a breath because that was a lovely touch. I do, in fact, think that Kuro would reach out and try to help others because it would "be a pain" to regret it later, much like Mahiru picked him up so he wouldn't regret it either. They have so much in common, tbh. Except, while Mahiru's motto is: "It's simple. Someone has to do it, so I guess I'm that someone." Kuro's is more: "It's a pain. Let's get this out of the way, so we can go take a nap together."

Having a moment like that in this chapter was, again, such a nice touch. I loved it to pieces 3

These chapters are just so entertaining to read and I really like the way you portray the relationship between the Sloth pair, as most people write it as everything is kinds dandy when actually there's a shit ton of bumps. Can't wait for ten~! :P