Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Well things look like they can go either way for Falcon at this point. Your writing quality is also pretty consistent so good job. Excited for the next chapter.

And the plot thickens. Can't wait to see how our 2 protagonists meet up.

Excellently written, good attention to grammar and punctuation and I didn't see any errors at least to the best of my ability. And your approach to the protagonist is a lot more interesting than most of the fics on here. Dark without coming off as trying to hard to look edgy. The mark of a mature story.
As a reviewer the only thing else I can say is. Great work! You just got a favourite/folower.

A very interesting chapter. Two potentials huh? Intriguing. I could really feel Edge's pain for Lillia. You did a good job portraying this! Keep it up!

A very descriptive chapter. I like how Raven and Kota are getting along. I'm interested as to how this friendship will grow.

I'm beginning to enjoy this Fanfic. I like how there is more than one organisation. I also like how Raven gets annoyed when called anything other than her codename. Keep up the good work!

The thugs deserved to die. You captured their accents very well and set the scene nicely.