Reviews for Stargaryan Ring |
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GL chapter 14 . 3h Why didn't Jon eat him some food? |
GL chapter 12 . 10h Lightning! |
GL chapter 11 . 13h Cousins... |
GL chapter 10 . 19h Hes lookin beefy statwise |
GL chapter 8 . 19h That was some good shooting. |
GL chapter 3 . 19h Hah he knows nothing... |
GL chapter 9 . 7/20 Maester Luwin is so smart. |
GL chapter 7 . 7/20 Will Jon ever wear it? |
GL chapter 6 . 7/20 I also like a nice Jerkin. |
GL chapter 5 . 7/20 Very well done. |
GL chapter 4 . 7/19 A fic about a fic about a fic...Genius! |
GL chapter 2 . 7/19 Twins! |
GL chapter 1 . 7/19 Good one |
Mycarel Zeal chapter 9 . 7/6 your story is good.. but so far it seems to me like it lacks direction.. its either that or your afraid to get things moving foward because so far.. all your chapters are almost the same.. all we see is jon getting better at things.. yet that doesnt make any impact in your story at all.. compare chapter 1 and chapter 9.. whats have you achieved so far with your plot? i see nothing.. |
Thean Bitter Crowe chapter 22 . 5/8 This story kinda disappointing, it is filled with so many great ideas but they just work horrible together, and this chapter shows it. |