My choices for suicide mission is

Both fire teams- Garrus
Ventilation-legion
Biotic-jack
Finale-Garrus and tali

Into the fire nicely done

Shouldn't there somewhere in the later point be Ashley sending a message to letter apologizing to Shepard for flipping on him on Horizon and understanding his reasons for siding with Cerberus and stopping the Collectors since she romanced him?
So far I have not found it here.
Just wondering since that happens in the game if Male Shepard had romanced her.

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Will there be lemons?

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Nicely done.

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Start Hiccup Haddock and the Deathly Hallows now.

You're story is an outline of the game we already played and a rehash of the fanfictions already made. Yours does nothing to stand out and I think that is a problem. It's not bad for a first time (?) writer, but I suggest you look at some other stories to see what works because this is too anemic in details to garner much attention.

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I wonder whether you're gonna ship Miranda and Shepard in this or not.
Because honestly, I liked in both Miranda Romance and Ashley Romance throughout the Mass Effect games but the version where Shepard cheated on Ashley is kinda mood-killer, I'd rather if Commander would stay loyal to Ashley throughout the entire storyline of the trilogy.

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