Reviews for Heartbreak
black sparkles chapter 1 . 9/18
God... Thanks a lot for making me cry...

This was so beautiful, Redlie (Red x Charlie) Is my fav TLOS ship, they really deserve more attention from the fandom, everything is about Coneree... Don't get me wrong I love them but like, fans give them way too much attention.

So thanks for writing something so amazing for my OTP.:3
ThaliaGrace6077 chapter 1 . 5/12
I agree. When I first looked for Land of Stories fanfics to read, I was depressed at the small number. I might write one soon, I don't know
That Guy chapter 1 . 2/14
Very nice. Red was easily my favorite character in the books. She really should get her own series.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2019
Froggy and Red’s ship name is Fred. They’re the couple of the series I ship most.
K16T chapter 1 . 9/15/2018
This fanfic is awesome and touching
Marshmallow344 chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
Thank you! I love this ship sooooo much, it broke my heart when they were seperated on their wedding day. I was on the verge of tears reading this.
RapidSammi chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
This had me in tears.
Literal tears...
yucun lou chapter 1 . 4/26/2017
I don't understand. Jack and Goldie Hate Red in the story. maybe not hate but CERTAINLY Not friends.
LANDOFSTORIESYA chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
I LOVE BREE AND CONNER SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH MAKE MORE MOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEE o I sound creepy.. Just plz make more
changelingwhorl chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
I just saw this now and I love it. I really hope they manage to get Froggy out of the mirror.

And just trash? I'm a dumpster for my ships.
Alex P chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
So, awesome fan fiction! I would love even more it though, if it was not just about Red. Kind of what Others see about when the 'Goat' (:P) Captures 'Froggy'

Alex
IAmYourFriend chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
Yo. Nice story. Whatever. Yo. Bye.
Btw, please try not to share the same seat with me again.
Imseriouslycryin chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
Read my 'name'. It's Awesome and sad. In your words...bittersweet...
Maddieriley12 chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
This is so good! I will post a Land of Stories fanfic soon, I'll just have to finish my first fanfic.