hey man i'm with you i think sheeva is hot too

Dude you are awsome

haven't seen a mortal kombat story here before. for a first read this is pretty good! love this and good to know that another chapter is coming soon! good luck with writing more chapters!

Good chapter. Your keeping the story similar to the games in how your having it progress which is nice but I would like to see more differences. (Maybe have Johnny cage beat cyrax or sub zero beat scropion). Keep up the good work.

This is very good! Cant wait for an update!

Good start so far I look forward to reading more

Pretty nice first chapter. Only saw a few mistakes here and there but nothing that made it hard to read or anything like that.

Interesting to see the tournament continue and how the love aspect progresses in this story.

Keep up the great work! I know the next chapter will be great as well