Kinda reminded me of that YouTube Red series that involves escaping a mansion.

You got me goin there for a sec. I thought they were going to die, lol. But the ghost lady is a nice addition. Maybe she'll come back next halloween and actually haunt them or everyone will dissappear the next day. Heh I would love if that happened. But anyways loved the story.

Man, I have got to say that is one of the best fanfics I have read in a long time. I loved it so much!