A promising start so far. Looking forward to seeing what you do with it.

Brilliant chapter! Update soon!

Tonks is such a fun character. Severus and her are an unusual combination. Looking forward to more after this interesting start.

Oh my gosh, it's only the first chapter and already I'm BLOWN AWAY by how amazing your writing skills are! I love how you established a relationship between Tonks and Sirius - will things be like they are in the books where James and Lily die and Sirius is thrown into Azkaban? It's obviously an AU (which I'm cool with), but I'm just wondering if you're going to include any canon aspects in this. :) Or is it just focusing on them as children now? Oh, I also want to say that I LOVE how you gave Tonks' parents some personality. Keep up the good work!