Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

good job hope you make more more chapters.

I LOVE THIS!

I really, REALLY want to read a continuation of this.

wow very nice i kinda want more now

heh, that would be good laugh to pull over on the world. All those megalomaniacal madmen getting trounced by 'doodles'. That would be something to see!

This is strange and I don't understand it completely but it certainly very interesting. Mito wasn't ever significant but I love when people focus attention on her.

My first question is, any chance that you'll turn this into a full blown story? I really enjoy the idea and the style of writing. If not, then the world has lost a great story that isn't a one shot and if yes YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYY!

Awesome chapter
Can't wait for more

I got chills reading this, it was amazing! Mito is one of my favourite characyers, and I love the way you've written her!

Seems like a cool story, hope it's a narutokushinamito pairing and its also spelled stratagem maybe you just missed that. Anyways hope to see more chapters and gl

Man this is awesome I love it and I while I'm a bit upset for how Mito had to use Kushina as a stepping stone for her plans (that's too Uchiha like for my taste) I understand why she did it after all like she said Kushina did see Kurama only slightly better than how most people saw him. But yeah Naruto is gonna show the world why the Uzumaki Clan is the Greatest of all of Kaguya's direct descendants.

Goodness gracious. This is... This would've been an epic beginning to an even more epic retelling. Wow, what a nice take on Naruto taking to Fuinjutsu!

UZUMAKI WERE THE BEST KICK-ASS CLAN EVER!