Reviews for A Demon's Creation
Guest chapter 2 . 8/10/2019
The hell they don’t have Y chromosomes above the waist. Bullshit
roger9481 chapter 14 . 2/19/2019
Thank god
Zack Lynch chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
The sibling relationship scenes with Zeref and Natsu was greatly appreciated and I enjoyed reading them so good job!
EtheriousLogia chapter 13 . 2/14/2018
Updaatttteee
Guest chapter 13 . 1/7/2018
Why did you kill Sayla off? I readthis expecting a good NaLa story. CCongratulations, this story just became irelevant. Moron!
Guest chapter 13 . 11/20/2017
UPDATTEE
camdawg chapter 13 . 8/21/2017
im guessing you have something planned for natsu to beat or scare mard beer and keyes back in line. I can't imagine you would gender bend them before the poll closed with out having planned them rebelling no matter how the poll ended. and hell yeah I loved the yandere sayla one of the coolest girls with one of my fav personality trails or how ever you describe yandere to be.
BlackDragonShinigami chapter 13 . 8/14/2017
Hue hue hue. Interesting
Marceillo chapter 13 . 8/10/2017
Buddy im loving your story but I've gotta ask you if sayla will come back?!
rufus264 chapter 13 . 8/10/2017
Interesting chapter
roger9481 chapter 13 . 8/10/2017
At this point I don't think you have a clue what the fuck you're doing. The story's great but I was confused there had been a timeskip (you do this constantly), the chapters are too short and you're dumping so much into it it's hard to keep track, and why does he go back to saying he's human when last chapter we see he fully embraced his demon side.
TheLaughingStalk chapter 12 . 7/26/2017
Sayla means business.
diegokpo30 chapter 12 . 7/10/2017
I love the yandere sayla, I love it I love it, I love it all possessive with Natsu, I can not wait to see how the story continues from here, I want to see more of this sayla, please update soon.
KuroMadoshiro chapter 12 . 7/10/2017
YYYEEEEEEESSSSS! SHE'S THE ABSOLUTE YANDERE!
Le Phoque Blanc chapter 12 . 7/8/2017
And Kyouka is out nieheheheheh never liked her always prefered sayla so YANDERE SAYLA FOREVER MUAHAHAHAHA
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