I know that this was written fifteen years ago, but I recently watched The Mummy movies for the first time, and I'm catching up on what I missed! This is really great :D

*sigh* I love this one (and all of your other film interlude stories). The film gave us a lot of great material as to how they came to care for one another, but we often forget that there was time in between scenes and more probably happened to help them grow closer. This was perfect.

Awwwww please finish the story! :3

This was a great one. On to the next!

Absolutely adorable! And I love how perfectly you write Evelyn, you really bring out the coquette in her. :)

Another very nice in-betweener. The fire imagery was really nicely done- not too heavy-handed to be irritating, not so light that you wonder where the title came from. You do a marvelous job of diving into these characters' psychology, and it makes for a really nice story. Bravo!

Another brilliant fic, with enough Burns-is-missing-important-parts-of-his-anatomy-and-it's-all-Evie's-fault to prevent it from being a pure fluff piece.

I love Evie's little fib at the end but the Dewey Decimal System had me in utter knots! It always seemed rediculously complicated to me, and I've only seen it in its refined 90's and 00's form. (I won't count the 80's; I never needed it to find anything written by Enid Blyton or Franklin W Dixon! OMG! I just realised that spending my childhood reading The Famous Five is what ignited my love for adventure stories like The Mummy!)

Okay, I REALLY loved this one. And if I could put italics in reviews, the 'really' in the last sentence would be italicized. ;) Oh man... that tent scene totally made me melt. Started smiling like an idiot again... Anyhoo, this seriously just made my day (or night, since it is night right now). Gah, you are such a wonderful writer.

Your fics make me happy.

Kenzay

It was kinda weird to read Rick's name as Rick at the very end instead of O'Connell like you wrote it out for the rest of the story. I would advise not to switch his name like that-it really does throw off the reader P

Other than that, it was a brilliant fic. It was really nice to read this after reading all your other fics beforehand .~

Very nice piece. Once again, you've done a great job with the characterizations, this time taking advantage of the 3rd person POV to get a glimpse into the heads of all the characters. You've done a great job with everyone, but Jonathan particularly shines with his charm and rare insights.

That was cute and fun to read. I like your characterizations.

Great story! So, where is the rest of it? C'mon, get to work!

oh this was awesome! So awesomely written and I loved the references to fire! So awesome! I LOVED IT! Great great job!

I love this story. :sigh: I hope it's not finished... it seems like it so much more could happen... you have to atleast get them to Cairo!

I hope you don't mind... but I'd like to use your idea of Rick's name being his only "honest possesion" in my fan fic. If that's not cool e-mail me and let me know.. and I'll see how I can change it. (it's not posted yet, so don't go lookin for it.. ) :)

And to end, I repeat.. I love this story. As a critique, in the end, Evelyn and Jonathon both kinda seem to lose their characters, and become much more aggressive then I think they would. And I don't know if Jonathon would ever try to patronize Rick... I don't think he's that much older than him. Other than that... the story was awesome!

I love it! Very well written! Keep up the good work!

Tricia