I love it. I’m excited to read more

You should continue what happens next

Oooooh that was epic! I had never thought of that concept. The whole split mind thing with E.N.D. was cool! Of course If it were me, I probably would have added some NaLu. Then again, I could say that about anything. (and I mean ANYTHING) Whatever. Ignore this crazy fangirl and keep up the good work! - Look forward to reading more of your writing~!

I enjoyed it. You didn't say that Zeref was dead, just that Natsu's fight with E.N.D was currently over. I like that and want to believe that something can be done to keep Natsu alive while ending the threat that Zeref currently is.