Reviews for Riders' Duty and Justice
Guest chapter 4 . 7/5
Story had so much potential until this chapter where it just makes the mc into a total beta lol he tells them to not involve his sister and first thing they do? Involve his sister and he just shrugs it off like it’s no big deal... pathetic
twilightnite13 chapter 10 . 3/13
You got that last scene about Mephisto calling himself an 'utter self-serving bastard' from Leverage didn't you? Kudos on that.
ChildoftheMultiverse chapter 5 . 12/26/2019
Not that I am criticizing your writing skills, or telling you how to write a story, and I don't believe that I am entitled enough to think that I any right to tell you what to do with your storyline, but this pisses me off. I am pissed off because all these heroes think that they have the right to tell the Devil's Bounty Hunter how to do his job. His only purpose is to give criminals their "just desserts". They are acting like going to Hell is not the worst punishment imaginable (they would literally be tortured for all eternity for their crimes, but no lets put them in human jail where they would likely escape and/or not learn their lesson). It's like they think that the human legal justice system is better at dealing punishment than literal cosmic justice dealt by the Devil, himself. While I do think that the Rider does not acknowledge the consequences of his actions, he does make sure that the punishment fits the crime. That's what I love about him, and I hate that sometimes people don't understand that. He is not some heartless demon that kills bad guys for fun, and if he does enjoy it it is because he is making sure criminals get what they deserve (just like every uncorrupted person who uses that same passion to join law enforcement). I'm sorry for going on that rant but I just had to say my piece.
Megatronus666 chapter 3 . 10/10/2019
Mephistopheles: What's wrong, Johnny? Worried about your father?
Young Johnny Blaze: What do you know about that?
Mephistopheles: Even a blind man can see he's sick. Thing about cancer is the time it takes... the toll on loved ones. Lives that are altered. Plans that have to be changed. Johnny, what if I could help your dad?
Young Johnny Blaze: Yeah? How?
Mephistopheles: How is not important. What if I could make him better? Give him back his health? Would you be willing to make a deal?
Young Johnny Blaze: Name your price.
Mephistopheles: Oh. I'll take... (Looks around)...your soul.
Young Johnny Blaze: (Chuckles) Okay.
Mephistopheles: By sunrise tomorrow, your father will be healthy as a horse. And you will have your whole life ahead of you. It's your choice, Johnny. (Brings out Pactum Pactorum) All you have to do is sign. (Johnny looks at it and his thumb gets cut on top of scroll, his blood drips on the signature line) Oh, that'll do just fine.
The Dark Warden chapter 12 . 9/2/2019
Oh god...the FEELS!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/18/2019
Why does he have a scythe they aren’t that good of a weapon and ghost rider is far more known for using guns and swords
Guest chapter 4 . 8/18/2019
Do you know how mentally challenged that is even if she didn’t know she’d still be a target for criminals. What matters is if the criminals know who he is. The reason why hero’s hide their identities is cause the less people that know who they are the less their loved ones will be threatened it’s called minimizing risks.
Flenners fanfics chapter 14 . 3/10/2019
you do realise ghost rider is a marvel character right?
not to be rude...
YeTianshi chapter 2 . 2/12/2019
The Rider seems a bit too merciful here. I mean, if Death is too good, there is always the option of the "Penance Stare", which is literally THE ability for punishing the guilty, since it makes them feel the pain they've caused every other innocent soul.
SonicAssasin1011 chapter 3 . 9/28/2018
Ohhhh boy...
VladImpaler chapter 7 . 7/28/2018
Ghost Rider taking down the Justice League by himself is not that unbealiveable as you may think and I don't mean the JL frok the cartoon. Especially if Zerethos gains full control of Ghost Rider and unleashes his bountless God-like Powers.
Lets list some facts
1-Hellfire
This is an imediate counter to Martian Manhunter. J'onn won't be able to come close to him. The telepathy that Manhunter is so famous for will also be useless. I really don't think even a telepath as good as J'onn can go into the mind of a vengeful ancient demonic entity like Ghost Rider and come out of it with his sanity intact. I wouldn't be surpirsed if J'onn tried to control his mind and end up fainting before he screams in pain.
This mystical fire will also be able to hurt Superman and WonderWoman practicly canceling their invulnerability. Here is were Hawkgirls mace might play a crucial factor since it has the ability to disturb magical energies. Since it was able to hurt Chaos Magic Grundy then it should hurt Ghost Rider too.
I am not sure how hellfire would interact with Green Lantern constructs but it should be a match at least.
2- Strength
Ghost Rider's strength and speed is way bellow that of Superman but with Zerethos in control,Ghost Riders physical attributes increasse to incalculable levels which should make him a physical match to heavy hitters like Superman and WonderWoman. Not to mention being covered in hellfire means that every punch the Rider delivers will hurt regardless of how little strength is behind it.
4-Durability
Ghost Rider is virtually indestructible and can not be harmed by conventional means. Even though his body can be damaged he can regenerate missing limbs and even his entire skull in seconds. Without a magic user in the team the Justice League will have no effective way of harming him.
Ghost Rider also has limitless stamina because the mystichal energies that grand him his powers compelty sustain him. So a hit and run defenssive tactic from the JL will not work om him sinve he never gets tired and can fight eternelly.
5-Weapons
Ghost Rider's chain and other weapons imbude with Hellfire should be effective against the JL, being a magical weapon it will be able to harm all the others and if he manages to wrap the chain around one of them long enough the individual will become powerless.
I have a feeling Superman and Wonder Woman will be able brake the chain but Ghost Rider can create a new one at ang time.
Lastly having a hellfire infused veichle like the metal dragon you did as an ally in the fight can surely turn the tide if it's not enough. This is something Ghost Rider can do and should defently be exploited to his advantege.
VladImpaler chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
I SOOO love the "Repent or Burn" and the power stealing thing Ghost Rider does.
rubeneliasrivera chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
then if they are truly evil not only do they die but their soul suffers in hell for eternity
rubeneliasrivera chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
See I like the Story but I hate the fact that you make him follow the no killing ghost riders purpose is to send evil souls down to hell to suffer. that's the agreement made between Mephistopheles and god. he shouldn't be stopped by the justice league. if anything at least make it where he always uses the penance stare on people that way he makes it where unless the person is truly evil their soul suffers eternal hell within their own mind
Axccel chapter 12 . 5/11/2018
Jason needs to stop moronically dropping his transformation. He is even stupid enough to do so when it could easily get him killed such as falling to his death. He is fortunately not greatly nerfed when transformed but quite a stupid person when it comes to staying in Ghost Rider form until he is sure he has won.
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