Before you really go and do it again, I’ll just tell you:
It’s ‘might as well’ not ‘minus well’ as that just makes no sense whatsoever. Otherwise great story and stuff. But please, PLEASE fix that.

So. Any plans on picking this back up? It would certainly make some people happy.

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100th Review! Congrats, dude. Amazing story!

When the funniest part of the chapter is the author's note.

Well this was quite the pleasant surprise! Glad to see you back! :)

There were some very interesting things I found in this chapter. I continue to look forward to how things will play out and I totally understand your situation. Here are just a few things that I found interesting and just some suggestions if you want to consider them.

Pros:

1. I really liked how you dived into the character of Mr. Afton. At first, the reader just sees him as just a cold, grumpy man. As soon as we get a glimpse of his personal life, we see that he is not so cold hearted as he seems.

2. The way you foreshadow the events of something bigger is very good. The parts where Emmet is questioning why Mr. Afton would be interested in working for Freddy Fazbear and giving the reasons why he shouldn't work there makes the reader question Mr. Afton's motives.

3. Your use of metaphor was really strong. "Mr. Afton lived on that desk."

Just some suggestions:

1. You seem to use the word initially a lot. Try to find a way to limit this or maybe substitute it. I understand completely how it is when you use a word a lot, trust me, I am still working on this too.

2. I am not really sure that it is a good idea to start a chapter without giving some indication of who is talking. Things were a bit confusing when I didn't know who was speaking. If you need to have a person talking in the beginning of the chapter, be sure to clue in the reader who is talking. It is quite easy to switch Emmett's and Mr. Afton's lines in the first two sentences.

3. The using of he's. Not saying to not use he's, just saying that everyone once in a while, drop in who is talking. Between Emmett and Mr. Afton, it can become confusing on who is speaking.

4. "Suddenly" is not really necessary. The part where you say that Emmett snaps back into reality would make the sentence sounds stronger as Emmett himself suddenly becomes aware. Its like giving the reader a surprise element. If you say suddenly, that kind of gives away the idea of a surprise.

Insert how I loved this story and chapter and how I look forward to all of your future ones. Insert how it's good to hear from you again _ Insert have a Happy New Years too!

I guess this means that Charlotte/Charlie isn't Henry's daughter in this universe.

So, does that mean Elizabeth is Henry's daughter in this universe or does she not exist in their world.

(Insert Phrase that exclaim's joy at seeing an update and how they would like to see another a little sooner next time) But seriously dude, i love this story and want to see it keep going! I wish you the best if luck!

Wonder if that spiritual voice is The Puppet/Marionette/Charlie (Henry's daughter).

Lol a fewdays...thats a when do youthink you are going to stop this story?(i hope no time soon)

Good chapter

Replace "toy" with "funtime". Pretty good

Continue it pls

New chapter _ Yay! I'm glad you're continuing this story,and I'm looking forward to the next chapter,I hope they can escape from that horrible next time, stay awesome, Peace :)