It's a pretty novel idea, at least I didn't read anything like that. I loved seeing the interaction between the two, and the way they met in this timeline. Hopefully one day you want to do something more extensive. (Although I know it is to dream too much XD, it's been years since you published).

Trust them to get along like a house on fire even if they didn't grew up together.

I like this alternative to the how they met. Great job! It was really fun to read.

I love it!

Short but great!

cool

sequel?

This is great! I like Luffy confusing Dragons as well.

funny, confusing - amazing af

more? please...

I think that it is sad that this story is marked as complete. I loved it, but I like the idea and your writing style and the story has so much potential. For example, you could write a chapter about the break out, or when Ace arrives back at the ship - everyone is sad and angry and them Luffy and Sabo comes aboard and after that Ace, and everyone is like 'what'

I hope you continue this! It's just so freaking cute ah

Love it! It was hilarious, would actually love to see another chapter of them after they had broken out maybe going to the whitebeard pirates with Ace

This was hilarious. Little confused on what ace was doing before he got caught though. Dideny seem like he was part of the whitebeards, was he leading spade pirates or traveling alone possibly? Also how was he captured?

Ah, Sabo. Too pretty for his own good. :)

That punching a Tenryuubito thing was my favorite, because of how it mirrored Luffy's canon action of the same. I also liked Ace's confusion and Luffy's congratulations of Sabo's smiling skills.

But in case you couldn't tell, a well written Sabo is pretty much my guaranteed favorite...