Lovely story! Thanks for your hard work!

This is really amazing! A bit more formal than I'm used to reading but you did a great job. Hope there's more soon!

This was quite nice. They feel some kind of attraction and empathy maybe? and make that evolve in something more romantic.
Lovely.

Really well done. I would love to see you continue it.

Dear EnjolrasLovedEponine,

Thank you for your further explanation. Of course I totally understand your point.
Therefore I am sorry if I left the impression that you'd have to change your story or be perfect. I never intended to interfere in your work, only thought it appropriate to leave a more clear explanation ;)
Sure, if you'd like to exchange or discuss we could do that :)Let me know~

Dear EnjolrasLovedEponine,

I am sorry that it's just me again and no new reviewer, and that I am kind of abusing your review section as a message board. I don't know if there is another way of messaging, since I have no accounts... (-_-)
But I accidentally noticed your note and felt the necessity to thank and reply you.
It was really kind of you to comment my reply, especially going as far as going through the trouble of posting it inside your story. I very much appreciate that.
I am happy that my review had been a little helpful. There was actually much more to praise or maybe even to suggest, but I wasn't sure if so many details are still interesting to you :)
Maybe I was a little too quick in criticizing the puppet Zelda thing.
After I read your comment, I reread said section and somehow got your point. It is indeed a very nice idea. Maybe the problem I had was how you incorporated it into the story. To me it was too "sudden", too much "out of the blue", especially for a oneshot. I think that had irritated me. Imo your idea needs way more room preferable even a backstory to have it blend in smoothly and showing the great potential it holds.
(Now while giving it a second thought so many ideas form in my head and I must admit it really is a very nice idea)
Sure, you did not want it any longer ;)
Nevertheless I thought it may be an important aspect to tell you for your future projects, that's why I felt it necessary to bring up.

I apologize if I got too in-depth and personal. This is your story and I did not intend to cross a line.
It makes me sad to see, that you haven't got tons of reviews already. This story does not get the attention it deserves, wherever others... Sorry I am out of words..
I am happy that you are an active writer. I will have a look on Kingdom of Glass and leave a review there too.
Of course I don't know of your personal life and I totally acknowledge your effort in writing. But be sure that I look forward to reading more~

Thank you so much for your effort creating this wonderful piece.
Since my early childhood I am a hopeless romantic especially when it comes
to Link and Zelda. I am not a fanfiction lover, but I enjoy reading about these two the most.
But! Professional written stories with adequate vocabulary and style that fit the medieval Zelda theme
(especially how Zelda articulates as princess/queen, regal and educated), a good plot
and an authentic interpretation of Link and Zeldas character are so rare! (or hard to find...)
I stumbled upon just a few in the past years, always looking for more. It's been over a year since I last read a wonderful completed story, checking everyday :) I was so happy when I came across yours. It didn't take me long to decide to download it and read it on the go. I literally devoured it and I was so sad when I finished it so quickly. It could have gone on and on.

I loved how your characters "spoke". It felt so natural. The plot was lovely and a realistic possibility for
how TP could continue. All of the game characters were nicely developed and felt absolute realistic and in-character.
Aside from a few careless mistakes, your writing style was very professional and fitting.
I wasn't too fond of "Puppet Zelda" though(purpose?), but this is really just a minor thing.
I would have loved to have a little more of "bittersweetness" ;) Like having a much more detailed progress of their growing relationship/love and having the wedding therefore much later.
Also having them slowly falling deeper for each other after the abrupt proposal/wedding would have been a nice version imo.
But this no criticism! I am just hopeless for romances and could go on and on and on... plus just everything to make this story longer, because I enjoyed reading it so much.
(I know it's already pretty long for a oneshot)

I am sorry for all the rambling. I am no writer myself and I know that it consumes a lot of time, but I hope that it's ok to selfishly hope for more Link/Zelda stories from you?
You made my day but I am sad that it's already over.
Thank you and hopefully having another story from you soon~