Awe! Reading this gave me nogstolia! Remembering the sweet... err... not-so-sweet beginning of Undertale. I liked it! Can't wait for whatever you have to bring to the table in chapter 3!

And, worry not, for you're writing is still gold! At least, -I- think that. But I don't think you have to worry. (Repetitiveness x2 in the above sentence. Sorry but I'm too lazy to attempt to fix... heh...)
Also, sorry about the writer's block! Personally, for me, writer's block is the worst thing ever. But it's awesome that you got this out. Thanks!

Oooh! Exciting! Excited to find out what happens next! Cool chapter!

Cool story so far. I look forward to reading more. :)

Oh cool. I can't wait to see how this plays out XD and its in first person? this is gonna be good XD

wow am I blown away would love to read more in the future!

This is great! Nice way to start.
Also I've NEVER noticed that ebott backwards spells tobe.
You blew my mind. Now I have to go find a new one.