I could feel the emotion coursing in it

This is a bittersweet but utterly right feeling story. This is how our heroes would begin to heal together again. Love it.

Love John and Shayera want to know what happens with them please update...

Great story. I really liked it

I am loving this

Such pain and rawness coming from Shayera, please update soon.

"Past GLxHG" I don't like the sound of that, John and Shayera belong together, they just have to work thru all the pain and unresolved issues they have... Poor Shayera will she ever catch a break so much pain and heartbreak she's had to endure...but thats what I admire about her her incredible strength and will to continue and atone for her sins.

Loved it :) I felt so bad for Shayera but I love that rawness you brought out in her with this chapter. I'm interested to see where this goes and I hope to read more into Shayera's thought process as this is going on. Good work and I hope to read more soon :)

Write more please... Can't wait to hear from Shayera.

Love it :) really curios to see the next chapter. Good work and I hope you update soon

beautifully written!