raven saying to garfield I love your hugs kisses and massages

Love the bbrae interaction here. :D

Great work :)

A sweet little one-shot with a solid grasp on the potential dynamics of BBRae as a couple. I appreciate your nod to their sex life; it's definitely there with Raven being half-demon and all. I also enjoyed your rather unique portrayal of Raven as one of those people who never had to study because the material always seemed to come naturally, but is eventually forced to learn how because of a particular class. Since the more typical approach is Raven as a goth nerd, this Raven was refreshingly different. Your little bit where BB taught her to study was a nice touch, too.
My only real criticism of this piece is the excessive amount of line breaks at the end. The first one makes sense, but the rest after that are unnecessary and, instead of making the dialogue easier to understand, actually clutter it up. You have enough tags that the speaking order is clear, and the lines that don't have tags can be identified based on their content, if that makes sense.
All in all, great job!

Best of luck!