| Reviews for Vanishing Kid |
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  erik chapter 4 . 12/10/2019 An intriguing story, well done. |
| Grunty chapter 4 . 12/4/2019 Kinetic learner is NOTHING! Its KINESTHETIC learner, mister! |
 Illusion of World chapter 4 . 9/5/2019 Finally a fanfic about naruto using (abuse) hiraishin, something like this kinda hard for me to find, good work author |
| marquis.shax chapter 4 . 7/25/2019 you know I've never really understood why people always claim you need the byakugan to know the real gentle fist when that's honestly not true. All you really need to know is human anatomy as the chakra points are generally in the same location 9 times out of 10. The Byakugan just makes it easier to see and find the points but really anybody could learn that style since as I said the Byakugan just makes it easier. The Byakugan is more so really just the perfect scouting/tracking tool due to the fact it can see through solid objects and can see a good distance away as well as allows you to see chakra (although how exactly the chakra seeing ability is different from the sharingan i'm not 100% sure I'm guessing it doesn't distinguish between chakra natures or really see how the chakra moves for each attack or something like that) |
| guest reader chapter 4 . 7/22/2019 want to know what red dawn is big time please tell your loyal readers |
| mrsancog chapter 4 . 7/5/2019 looking forward to more |
| buterflypuss chapter 4 . 7/4/2019 interesting |
| kamui5 chapter 4 . 7/2/2019 Looking forward to more, and if he can go further. |
| kamui5 chapter 3 . 7/2/2019 Enjoying the story so far please continue :) and I'm looking forward of how they grow :) |
| RavenShadow chapter 4 . 7/1/2019 It’s so nice to see this story again, I am really enjoying it. |
| Reasonable man chapter 4 . 7/1/2019 It is so good news that you haven't abandoned your fic and will start updating. Lets see how this fic will progress further. |
| Ash0011 chapter 3 . 9/29/2018 eeh, this is an interesting one |
| Rajani-the-Freak chapter 3 . 4/25/2018 when will you update? |
| Ghest chapter 3 . 9/17/2017 I stand by my previous criticism about the flow, however I would like to amend my statement about preferring TheBeardedOne's works: there are other writers of his caliber here, and while you aren't one of them(owing to my issue with the way your work flows, or more specifically, doesn't flow well) I was more or less burned out on Naruto fics when I said what I said. I don't think this is as bad a story as my initial review may have implied. |
| guest reader chapter 3 . 7/4/2017 naruto saved sasuke now he needs to acknowledge that hinata loves him and he loves her oh could you please make sakura shy and blushes and talks quiet around sasuke please |
