Best fem!Revan ever! please continue this...

Great story so far can't wait for more keep up the good work :)

Surprised I didn't find this one sooner. very cute and funny so far. As well as some badassness to it.

I'm hoping Juhani isn't going to end up dead or something, considering how Revan had a huge impact on her. guess we'll see if you update this one.

It's funny how people assume that Revan and Meetra were friends, considering that Malachor was a place that Revan intentionally set to be a mass killing environment for his least supportive subjects (among which Meetra was in the thick of).

"Observation: Master, I do not believe that the Mandalorians were the true target at Malachor - I believe that the intention was to destroy the Jedi, break their will and make them loyal to Revan"

"I do not know if you examined the records of the deaths at Malachor, but you cannot escape that many of the Jedi and Republic that died were not Revan's strongest supporters."

If you read between the lines then you see that the relationship between Revan and Meetra wasn't sunshine and rainbows as you suggest. That along with the exceedingly dangerous missions (Dxun chief among them) Meetra was sent on would lead us to believe that Revan wanted her dead/broken.

"Revan's apprentice wanted me to kill you - I believe Revan wanted you to face the Jedi Council to show them how far you had fallen"

The point here is that the Exile is a puppet. Everywhere he goes, he's being used in the machinations of someone else.

We already know the Kreia has been manipulating events from the start, and directing the Exile onto a course of her choosing. We know how the Jedi Masters used him as an example to others. Now we find out that Revan had manipulated him as fully as anyone else. She used him at Malachor, and then she orchestrated the Exile's return to the Jedi Council.

It is unlikely according to the canon of Kotor II that Revan and Meetra were friends (although that was completely forgotten about in "the old Republic" which failed to understand a lot of the implications Kotor II invested in)

great job, update soon pleas.

4/5

MOAR, MOAR, MOAR!

You have finally proven to me that being dark is not so bad at all...

First it was all about being light and a good guy.
Then it came to being in-between and finally into this and what else you have made...

The key point is how you actually write your stories and so far you have the honor of pulling most enjoyable good guy, bad guy and in-between 'dont give a damn what you think'-side.

With that said i'll leave this with a parting comment of hurry up with new updates 'cause i'm running out of stories to read.

I think i have seen all of your (Lillith-verse) HP stories by now

continue this please

I still get frustrated by you butchering the “to make a long story short” saying.

So she actually met Mission in this timeline, huh?

Eh...I far prefer this ending. Both because it feels more in character for the Revan presented in this story (as her motivation is to unite the galaxy against a greater evil), and it makes more sense because of the first reason. It starts off with the 3rd to last paragraph having already happened:
Revan (Hereby known as R for the purposes of this alternate ending): "Well we can't ALL be ruled by our libido, dear. Honor has to mean something to ONE of us."
Bastila (Hereby known as B for the purposes of this alternate ending): "What's that supposed to mean?" she asks, with indignation in her voice.
R: "Well, I owe them my life. That's not the type of thing that you take lightly. So, I'm going to stay right here, where I can watch the battle, to make sure that Kashyyyk doesn't suffer massive damage in it. I mean, I might not have *battle meditation* like others do, but at th..."
B: "Oh...Well why didn't you just say something about wanting me to use my battle meditation?"
R: "I thought, perhaps, the story of them saving my life would spur you to doing it without me having to be so blatantly obvious about it."
B: "Hey now, that's not fair! I mean, our forces outgun the Rebellion's b..."
R: "Just because our forces outgun their forces doesn't mean that victory is assured. The Mandalorians forces outgunned my forces back during the Mandalorian Wars, and I still wiped the floor with them. Any superior force can be taken down by a superior strategy."
B: "Yeah, I can see your point. I'll get to using my battle meditation to break the enemy's concentration now."
R: "And afterwards, there'll be a extra special reward for you, lover"
(The extra special reward is Revan asking Bastila if Bastila would like to spend an entire day figuring out what Bastila's fetishes are, to which Bastila agrees, and then they do so, and one of Bastila's fetishes is having Revan covered in some sweet substance [might be honey, might be cake frosting, might be whipped cream], and then Bastila gets to lick it off. I've seen that in multiple stories before, so I assume that it's a real thing? I mean, not all at once, mind you, but once in The Stand with honey, and once in a My Little Pony shipping fanfic called Apprentice Ship. I mean, they didn't come right out and say what was going on with the whipped cream, but they alluded to it, so...I don't know? Besides which, this way you'd totally have set up another chapter! I mean, the extra special reward doesn't have to be what my extra special reward was, but considering the dueling scene, I figured it kinda made sense, sorta kinda?)

How dare Bastila disrespect the past! The past is EVERYTHING! The past is what laid the foundation for the present, and what lays the foundation for the future!

Your description of Revan makes me think of Lily Evans, Jean Gray or a Female Harry Potter. Your AN at the end makes me think that Revan is basically what the Daughter of Lily Evans and Urahara Kisuke would be like.

To be honest, Revan seems to be the only Sith that isn't retarded. Vader might also share that claim. The Dark Side of the Force seems to have a corrosive effect on those who are too weak willed to resist it's influence. Darth Sideous is a perfect example due to how deformed he is.

Looks great!