The older girl, in chapter one, was Kat? Digressing from that question, best of luck with the rewrite.

Vergil is going to be interesting.

That could be a problem.

Please update your story soon!

Please update

Hope to read more soon.

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I'm liking this story I look forward to more.

good chapter

On a more positive note,Kat will be at least be marginally useful in the world of Harry Potter unlike in the reboot. Also in this case you could have gone with Donte instead of Nero since at least the former is actually from England.

But it appears that this is merely a crossover fan fiction set within DMC4.

good job! I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter!

I approve 100% of Virgil being in the story. I can't wait to see him in action.

I wonder where yamato is? Secondly what is your theory of nero from DMC 4?

oooohh!
verg is alive here!
kinda like in dmc 4 something edition

this interest me greatly!
more please!

The huge problem with including Kat apart from her being in that god awful reboot is that not only is she anything but cool but the reboot has nothing to do at all with the original series. So why even bothering doing this in the first place. Stick to the original cast.

Yet another crossover fan fiction that commits the grave mistake of combining two characters into one. I do not understand why people do this as it does nothing but crate massive problems and plot holes.

You really might want to reconsider writing this chapter again and not commit so many errors.