Reviews for Good Girl |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 Omg I just loved this |
RenaNiemand chapter 1 . 12/12/2016 this does not feel like an ending at all... you have some spelling mistakes btw, i think you should continue it or make it longer, it was like too rushed. Yeah Anna can have the feeling of danger from Hans but for Elsa to actually believe her she will need a proof, like "I hear pretty boy talk about ***" whatever you want to put here, making Elsa a target so someone could have a reason to threater her. That would be a perfect reason why Anna would accept to transform into human, because Elsa's life is in danger. And i dont know if it really makes sense that Anna can talk like humans just like that... i think it should be more difficult for her to try talking to Elsa and stuff, to me the part where you ended it looks more like the middle of a fanfic plot. Anyway, thx for your hard work Nicole, its awesome. |
ShadeFallen chapter 1 . 12/9/2016 I am willing to go down the rabbit hole here, though a lot of stuff just happened |
bondwoman chapter 1 . 11/28/2016 I agree, you should make this a story! |
jscott1363 chapter 1 . 11/27/2016 Please let there be at least one more chapter for this! Please! ~Haley Earthstone |
Vidgamelords chapter 1 . 11/11/2016 TURN THIS INTO A STORY. |
Aldmagali chapter 1 . 11/5/2016 Por favor dime que va a ser una historia por lo menos xon mas capitulo ... Porque la verdad es un buen comienzo y quiero saber mas... |
Unique102 chapter 1 . 11/2/2016 Please make this into a story it's so good |
AkiraIzumi14 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 Whaaaaaa why end it suddenly? It could have a good story line - but yeah thank you for the update! . |
nicfoto5 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 Ooow I really hope this turns into another one of your famous frozen stories I've really like all of them so far so I can only assume that this stories going to be great |
LSWolfe chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 That was good! |