I liked this :)

Just *one* thing is missing: a brief flashback to when the original "deal" was made, etc. Other than that, this is a lovely piece!

Your Constant Reader,
Heidi R.

Oooo this was chilling... well done. Xoxo

Wow! Just wow!

Daaaaaaamn! That was such an interesting concept! I would have never.. just holy crap! That's awesome! Ahhh! It's just.. wow.

I love it!

I enjoyed this! I'm curious as to how she was able to get ahold of the diary? I think having read this the day after a big event irl, things seem gloomy. At least Hermione is able to take control and do things according to her choosing.

Ok, it's well written and I like your canon portrayal of Tom and Hermione, especially Tom. However, I just can't figure out the why? The ending doesn't make sense, why would she want to stay in the diary? How did they fall in love? There's not enough background story for me to understand or have a sense of resolution for the ending.

I think you have the potential to write a really good Tomione fic, perhaps a chaptered one- not just a shot. You should consider writing one for the sake of all of us.

Happy belated Halloween :)! Sorry, I missed the notification that you posted another story. This one was rather scary but fitting for Halloween :). And it truly is an interesting pairing, especially the young Tom Riddle from the diary who would match Hermione's intellect. Thanks so much for sharing your story!

I wish there was more to this! This was amazing!

So creepy! Perfect for Halloween!

Whoa.. Now that was am interesting read ...!
If that hadn't come from you, I would have Never Chosen this pairing ...
awesome story and I admire your courage to have written this.. congrats!

By the way, did you already read "the cursed Child"? And did you like it?
Hope all is well with you. Love, Katja

I love that you took a giant leap from your comfort zone and wrote something so different! Every day you amaze me with your words. You're awesome.

Ohh, I loved this one! I'm not usually up for Tomione, but I trusted you. And, of course, I wasn't disappointed. Wonderful little gem!

wow, this is... well, it's wonderfully written but oh so dark. I like the idea that Hermione ends up resting as a soulless spirit in a book. It's poetic in a way.