I'm also writing a Adventure/Angst/Tragedy story that is currently 3 chapters with 9.8k words (lol big yikes). That is what caught my attention, along with the summary and title.

I'm currently loving this fic, and can't wait to read more of it. You're very well written for a first time writer, especially considering the fact that it's in first person. (Maybe it's just me, but I always found the 3rd person limited written fics to be better all around.)

You have a lot of promise, like a LOT, lmao. As said before: can't wait to read more!

Will there be a pairing? Maybe, maybe not: who knows sksksksksksks

Thanks so much for deciding to share this gem with us :)

XOXO,
PercyJacksonGreekFreak

Hey, you wrote in incoherent code, please fix

good

Ok NVM

Is this a percy x chaos

I like it so far. To be honest I almost stopped reading as soon as order introduced himself (Can't stand the get betrayed become champion of chaos/order and get awesome powers and/or wings story line) but i chose to stick it out for another chapter and I'm glad I did. I prefer longer chapters even if it means more infrequent updates.

awesome! please continue this story!

Love it! Please continue!

Great story already

KEEP GOING, DONT BE A QUITER-AUTHOR LIKE ME!

I think there is definitely a lot of potential in this! I like how you describe that seemingly endless battle and the chapter ending was great. On thing I think should happen is longer chapters though. Maybe that's my personal preference but its my opinion. ;)

Luck with the story. I'll be watching for an update.