Reviews for Phoenix Rising |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why is Yang having a mental breakdown over Blake running away? Not for losing her arm or Ruby being in a coma, but for Blake? I feel bad for Weiss and Sun getting mistreated like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I did end up reading to the end. It's... interesting. It's not poorly written, the first two chapters were a bit lackluster. It's been months since you last updated, so it seems like you may have run into IRL situations. Off-topic I suppose. Mauve or Fenrir is an OC, but he isn't the main focus, which is nice. It's interesting to see the story take a different turn, as Yang's journey to find her mother and Ruby aren't well covered. Curiously enough, neither have you given her (Yang) her prosthesis, which she gains in canon. I suppose I'll follow the story in case you decide to update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started reading this fairly recently because Coeur mentioned it in their fic. It has an interesting premise, but it feels slow. It's not bad and we're seeing Yang's struggles, but it's kind of bland to read. Maybe I'll finish it, maybe I won't. This doesn't seem like one of the typical fics I'd read either, but I've also read quite a few. I'll keep reading a bit more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn i loved that phone call. Poor Emerald though, it seems that there is at least a little bit of campanionship between her and Mercury. And she doesnt know he kicked the bucket ... |
![]() ![]() Man that phone call was funny ;D Awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it Mistral? |
![]() ![]() ITS BACK! |
![]() ![]() Curious to see what's going on in the tower if there is power still, have a sneaking suspicion some people are left inside from the fall perhaps, would explain the Grimm outside, anyway great chapter and excited for the next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. This chapter only left me even more hyped up for the next update. It was nice seeing more of Weiss and Yang together too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. Shame Mercury already died, i didnt really like him but that was just brutal. Excited to see how they fight their way to Beacon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's nice to see that this story is going in such a different direction than cannon while still being one of the best stories on this platform. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() This fanfic is not what I expected but, its not bad. I think I'll stick around and see how this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to know Neo has gone traitor on Cinder's gang. Should be fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very happy to see that Neo will play some part in this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First: Weiss you a cold one. It had to be said, and now that I've made the pun we don't have to go any farther. Second: BAKED ALASKA. Nah, it's not going to happen. On the other hand, strange enemies make for stranger bedfellows. |