Reviews for Phoenix Rising
supboyyyyy93 chapter 1 . 4/27
Why is Yang having a mental breakdown over Blake running away? Not for losing her arm or Ruby being in a coma, but for Blake? I feel bad for Weiss and Sun getting mistreated like that.
SilverStarWolfGoddessAmarantha chapter 15 . 1/17
Well, I did end up reading to the end. It's... interesting. It's not poorly written, the first two chapters were a bit lackluster. It's been months since you last updated, so it seems like you may have run into IRL situations. Off-topic I suppose. Mauve or Fenrir is an OC, but he isn't the main focus, which is nice. It's interesting to see the story take a different turn, as Yang's journey to find her mother and Ruby aren't well covered. Curiously enough, neither have you given her (Yang) her prosthesis, which she gains in canon. I suppose I'll follow the story in case you decide to update.
SilverStarWolfGoddessAmarantha chapter 2 . 1/17
I started reading this fairly recently because Coeur mentioned it in their fic. It has an interesting premise, but it feels slow. It's not bad and we're seeing Yang's struggles, but it's kind of bland to read. Maybe I'll finish it, maybe I won't. This doesn't seem like one of the typical fics I'd read either, but I've also read quite a few. I'll keep reading a bit more.
Luckenzio chapter 14 . 11/25/2018
Damn i loved that phone call. Poor Emerald though, it seems that there is at least a little bit of campanionship between her and Mercury. And she doesnt know he kicked the bucket ...
Wow chapter 14 . 11/24/2018
Man that phone call was funny ;D
Awesome chapter
redacted987 chapter 14 . 11/24/2018
Is it Mistral?
Guest chapter 13 . 11/1/2018
ITS BACK!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/26/2018
Curious to see what's going on in the tower if there is power still, have a sneaking suspicion some people are left inside from the fall perhaps, would explain the Grimm outside, anyway great chapter and excited for the next.
Luckenzio chapter 13 . 10/24/2018
Damn. This chapter only left me even more hyped up for the next update. It was nice seeing more of Weiss and Yang together too.
Luckenzio chapter 12 . 7/29/2018
Awesome story. Shame Mercury already died, i didnt really like him but that was just brutal. Excited to see how they fight their way to Beacon.
Summer-Rose-RWBY chapter 12 . 7/28/2018
It's nice to see that this story is going in such a different direction than cannon while still being one of the best stories on this platform. Keep up the good work.
Brig chapter 11 . 6/16/2018
This fanfic is not what I expected but, its not bad.
I think I'll stick around and see how this goes.
Sunrayz chapter 11 . 5/15/2018
Glad to know Neo has gone traitor on Cinder's gang. Should be fun.
Summer-Rose-RWBY chapter 11 . 4/30/2018
I am very happy to see that Neo will play some part in this.
T0PH4T chapter 11 . 4/30/2018
First:
Weiss you a cold one. It had to be said, and now that I've made the pun we don't have to go any farther.

Second:
BAKED ALASKA. Nah, it's not going to happen. On the other hand, strange enemies make for stranger bedfellows.
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