God I wish there was more

This is different than usual but I like it

I really like it so far!

awwww can u make this a series. It's a very good one please~

This is awesome

But does it really HAVE to be the end? This story could goon, which I spose I could handle reading a tad more, or like heaps more. Love it. Great originality, fit alot into this short. Thanks heaps for sharing

Could you write more? Please? I loved it.