Will Logan himself appear in this?
If he does, would you picture him voiced by Steve Blum (who usually voiced him in cartoons) or Hugh Jackman (who plays him in the movies)

Just finished reading this, it’s really good. I hope the sequel happens sometime soon especially with the release of season 4 happening within the year.

This was pretty great, hope to see the sequel soon

And you make the mistake of using my instead of his at times so it goes like this

He put on my shoes and he walked outside

AAARRRGGGHHG WHAT THE HELL? You write this in third person but you use first person tense, it's so damed annoying and flawed, quite literally turn all the he's to I's and the flow of the story would be so much better

I was hoping I was wrong that Wolverine existed as a known hero in this world. That's the most boring way you could've handed it. You made him a copy of a better hero and everyone's going to know it. His powers are familiar and outside reacting to Logan having had a son his abilities will surprise nobody. That could've been like half the fun, you know? Introducing a power set none of them were familiar with. Definitely knocked my interest in this story down a couple pegs.

I don't like this story, it has small amount of common sense. Just wanted to let you know.

wtf okay, so you are in Toronto, but near Quebec but in Alaska? am I not understanding this?

hey, um...idk if you know much about Canadian geography but Toronto and Quebec are a good 8hrs away by car. that's driving straight no breaks. I also don't know why you brought

Hey man this is my second time reading this fiction and I loved it all and I have an idea for a season 2 I’m an awful writer however I feel it would be popular and that is during or at the beginning of the second season another Cadmus clown is found and James believes it to be his brother but instead finds its a clone of sabretooth and taking pity on him decides to help raise him through the team he’d be physically stronger and faster but would have no metal skeleton so be more prone to injuries and much like Connor he would start secluded then end up a central member of the team

"Since X-23 doesn't have an adamantium skeleton, however, her healing factor isn't constantly working to keep her healthy from the poison, so as a result, her healing power is sharper and can heal faster than Wolverine's healing factor, which is slowed down due to the adamantium poisoning."

yeah having full Adamantium skeleton sucks even if Laura gets Adamantium poisoning it won't be as bad as Wolverine and it won't even be fatal and she's at her full power because she only has metal on her claws. Hope you wrote an explanation on why Razor won't have Adamantium poisoning or get hindered by it.

Ok so what about Adamantium poisoning? If his whole skeleton is covered in Adamantium that's bad. It would've been better if it's just the claws like X-23. And I heard when Magneto removed Wolverine's Adamantium he actually got stronger so having full Adamantium skeleton is just a hindrance. Maybe someone can remove it and just leave the ones in his claws.

ok I don't know how long a month is where you are but sb was 16 weeks old when he was found and that equals 4 months plus has been almost a month since at this point so he is probably around 5 months

Don't read this if misspelling bothers you. Occasional misspelling of a word is a typo. When the correct spelling is never used, its not a typo, its just wrong.
"Fallowing" instead of "following" for example.

I remembered this story a while back and re-read it. I remember why I liked it too as it gives a different team and dynamic, at least in my opinion. Hope to see more of this whenever it’s hashed out. Was kind of wondering if you’d do a version where it’s Captain America’s kid in the team.