Reviews for From Jinchurriki to Speedster |
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![]() ![]() For a second I thought you’ll start flashpoint again |
![]() ![]() The embodiment of lust update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continua pronti |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update and continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have to say i really apreciate this fanfic, it has its downs but not even worth mentioning, just wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto training is like any other but in this chapter feels like he been nerf |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to continue this story or is it finished |
![]() ![]() ![]() The cult of Bibbo sends their regards. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that he knows how to fight |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope at least he knows how to fight since he was a ninja |
![]() ![]() ![]() That sounds like a great but hard thing to do |
![]() ![]() ![]() Arrowverse Fan 217 might be able to help you, so maybe talk to him. Looking forward to what your story looks like when you do it, and I look forward to when you update this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eren Yeager (Attack on the Titan) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() so... how are you planning to handle the speed force dying because of the Spectre? personally i think the green lightning is a cool look, but with the Speed force dying, and no cure in Canon yet, it does mean that naruto's powers are going to be... finicky for a while. especially given Barry is "the engine that keeps the Speed Force Going" your words. not trying to be a pessimist... but its starting to look like you are writing yourself into a corner. my advice? wait for the current season of Flash to end before writing anymore chapters to this. you are quickly approaching the overtake position. and we all saw how that turned out with Game of Thrones. when the fandom material overtakes the base material, things get very messy very quickly. in GoT, the show outstripped the books, and the screen writers started making their own content without the authors input. and the final couple of seasons were utter shit as a result. this fic is approaching that same dilemma. i like this fic, and would hate to see it follow that same route. so please, give the show a chance to get further in before you tackle anymore of THIS fic. Arrow is over and 100% finished. do with it what you will. but the Flash? still airing, and the current season is not yet finished. so you MIGHT want to pull back a bit before you go any further with this fic. just saying. not trying to flame or be a troll, just making my opinion known. do with it what you will. listen, dont, your call. and as always Thank you for your time. |