Jesus christ dude, you have good writing ability but you're making D. va way too edgy. Seriously, you could cut a steel beam with all that edge you're putting on her.

Damn good story, I want moar !

I know this was last updated like 2 years ago but I just stumbled across it and it’s really ducking good, hope you pick it up at some point! If not hope you’re at least doing okay

Two years since yesterday. Hope everything is well! I love going back and reading this story!

What a cliff hanger

cool idea, decent writing, my main complain is for someone with an attitude like that she is extremely compliant, when she is kidnapped she gives almost zero backtalk and what little there is, is halfhearted at best, on her second day she has her computer back and doesn't try to send a message to Korean authorities saying "hey I've been kidnapped" she seems remarkably unconcerned about how her parents might react to the fact that she is missing, and finally she is wandering around a city without a minder and she doesn't even try to escape I'll let the fact that she blindly trusts Ana on the whole parents issue but for someone who has been kidnapped and is being for to join a paramilitary organisation she is taking it well and not very antagonistic

Good lord this is some good writing. I really enjoy the way the atmosphere and scenery is described, incredibly detailed. Just found this and binge read it (literally saved me from boredom during insomnia, haha) and PHEW the tension is real.

Too bad it seems like this won't be updated anymore but I think that's fine, this is a well written piece on its own. Thank you for an awesome reading experience! Have a good one!

Heyy, longtime you didn't post any chapter. I read your story and I love it! I hope you'll update one day. I want to know what Will happen between Angela and Hana !

OMG THIS IS SO GOOD

I know that it's been over a year since the last update, but I'm still very excited for it! :3

One, this story is really awesome, I love the way you wrote it.
Two, (somehow) when I was reading the part where Lena asked Angela about what she heard i thought it said, “Did you kill ?” And I couldn’t stop laughing for a while

Hey! Where ya been? I hope everything's ok...

Its been awhile...

I loved this story so much especially the “fucking degenerates” it was beautiful I hope you update this soon I miss reading it. It’s hard to find a long story I can binge read and this was that story was worth staying up all night to read it

hope this story updates soon :c

The "fucking degenerates" line from ch 1 had me laughing so hard for some reason. Also the "weird green frogs" was on point too. I always love characters that seem all perfect but turn out to be hella mean irl haha. Poor mercy...

Where are you? Please, come back to us and the story