| Reviews for A New Start |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 7/16 This is good! Please Update! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/12 Good story! More? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/12 Update. |
 jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 11/1/2017 Genial vgf |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/3/2016 wow its very interesting amourshipping chapter, congrats dude and as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude. |
| thor94 chapter 5 . 12/3/2016 ask why skull boss is interested to ash good battle, but again inconsistent, electroball is a move from ash coma. Pikachu can't magically know it. You need to give us explain about how some of ash coma fantasy foreign moves and pokemon appear in real world. |
| thor94 chapter 4 . 12/3/2016 how fennekin can exist since the pokemon is supposed ash coma fantasy? |
| thor94 chapter 2 . 12/3/2016 ash become more mature because 15 seems not coherent, since ash was in coma, he is supposed to be a 10 years boy in mind in 15years old body. so serena contacted ash |
| thor94 chapter 1 . 12/3/2016 could be interesting, but don't forget beside few kanto pokemon (and maybe childhood people), all pokemon and trainers ash met in his dream are supposed be fantasy, means, all pokemon from pokedex number 150 to 719 can't exist in your fic (means you can't give serena fennekin or pancham since those pokemon are ash fantasy, and if kalos region exist, the pokemon should be completely different from ash imagination) |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 5 . 12/2/2016 Awesome chapter! What'll happen next? Will Ash and Serena be able to even escape? *gulps and shudders* I'm trembling in excitement! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/27/2016 ooh sounds very interesting, great job on this amourshipping chapter, and as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude. |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 4 . 11/26/2016 Great chapter. In my opinion, write this however you want. As long as it's good, I am too. Anyway, looks like Team Skull Grunt wants to tussle! What'll happen next?! Update again soon! |
| DJKitKat12 chapter 4 . 11/26/2016 Which Pokémon did Serena pick? Can it please be Litten? |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 3 . 11/21/2016 Hooray! Reunited once more. And this time, it's not in a dream! I look forward to the next chapter. |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 11/21/2016 HOLY MOLY! Serena?! But how?! |
