Reviews for Pokémon: Birthright
christianj2 chapter 1 . 3/14
Holy Hell It’s been so long since I’ve seen Your stories ever since I was reading Your Yo-Kai Watch and Pokemon story so I glad to be back into reading Your stories again! Btw great chapter:).
Akasha Bloodriver chapter 5 . 9/10/2018
I just discovered your fiction and I find it a pity this waiting time. Hoping to read more about your fiction.
ARSLOTHES chapter 5 . 1/9/2018
Can't wait for the next chapter, hope you pair Ash with either Corrin or Azura
GlitchWarrior chapter 5 . 12/16/2017
Well, it's slightly different than the actual story; for one, Felicia as Corrin's retainer on the female Corrin route, although it's supposed to be Jakob. But, of course, the whole series to this point has been PERFECT. Watching Ash in the events of Birthright should be partially amusing, but also moving. I kind of wonder who he and Corrin will S-rank... Each other? No, that'd be to obvious, and besides, I dunno if Ash is bright enough to S-rank ANYBODY.
PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 2 . 11/24/2017
Are you going to have Ash experience a form/variety of Psychometry by touching that amulet-like pendant that Azura carries, causing him to subconsciously get visions as a byproduct of his Aura interacting with the pendant and/or whatever magic that might be present within in?
Nega Mewtwo chapter 5 . 10/11/2017
I see what you mean about Aura not being completely like magic, but you have to admit, some of the things Lucario can do with Aura is similar to Psychics, which are often thought of as the "magic-users" in Pokemon: telepathy, sensing others outside of the main five senses, manipulation of supernatural energy...
DarkEnigma95 chapter 5 . 10/10/2017
Welcome back! Glad to have another chapter of the story.
I am happy Corrin will be meeting Ash next chapter. I might be wrong but seeing as how Ash has been training with a sword and a bow, I would say he might be in the Bow Knight class. I think the Dread Fighter class would be cool for him though (up to you though).

Looking forward to the next chapter from ya. I am thinking of doing a story on this game, the only name for it I have came up with at the moment is 'Fateful Beginings'. What do you think?
rufus264 chapter 5 . 10/9/2017
Yes! A new chapter!
rst64tlc chapter 5 . 10/8/2017
Unique on please! This is the first Corrin X Ash (and possibly Corrin X Ash X Azura) fic I've seen, make it count.
Bunny153539 chapter 5 . 10/8/2017
Wow, good job with the protagonists. Normally when Fanfic writers switch POV's the characters all feel like the same person, but you got your Ash and Corrin to feel so different, it really felt like I was reading from a different Author! That's... Just, wow, impressive :D
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 5 . 10/8/2017
Great chapter! Loved this! I definitely hope to see the next chapter very soon! So... UPDATE! I'm so excited to see Corrin meet Ash! *screams fanboy-ishly*

I also wonder, will Takumi still be cautious around Corrin when they meet? I hope not. It's never good for you to ostracize your own family.

Till next update!
Kamencolin chapter 5 . 10/8/2017
Good chapter i think ash should have a unique class
Coral the Leviathan chapter 5 . 10/8/2017
Finally updated! I like this chapter, especially the ending. Now let's see if Ash can keep Takumi in check while Corrin is in Hoshido. Which speaking of, I cannot wait to see how they meet and what Corrin will think of Ash. One thing I also notice; what happened to Jakob? Isn't he suppose to accompany female Corrin? What did you do to him?
PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 1 . 10/4/2017
You do realize that Ash is not really the Pokemon equivalent for Ryouga Hibiki and/or Roronoa Zoro, right?
Bunny153539 chapter 4 . 10/1/2017
Why make Ash one of the standard Classes? None of them fit him. Why not make him a sort of unnamed custom class based on suing the skills he learned in his world, with the skills he picks up here?

P.S. Great job with Takumi!
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