There was good use of jealousy in this to spawn emotion in Sasuke. In the story, Sakura had grown through the years. She didn't fawn over Sasuke when he came back, which was nice, but it definitely had me wondering what was going through her mind when she so easily let Sasuke take her away. Thanks for sharing!

Great short. It flowed well and you were able to create an atmosphere for me that kept me engage in the story! I love jealous Sasuke lol.