Great job please continue it soon

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umm not sure if someone said this or not, but Yang actually absorbs kinetic energy, if it were damage she could just punch herself/ the ground or wall for a quick boost.
apologies if i'm pedantic, anyway love the stories, keep up the good work

A Naruto/Kingdom Hearts Crossover would be a great fanfic to have them read.

NE- NE i actually have a story request ni yuki-nii San, and this story request actually involves kuronodono12's Atlantis crossover with Naruto.

Nope u continue both chronicle stories

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Please update this story, i really like it.

Cool 3 chapters continue please.

Hope to see more!

Let me guess, RL taking up the majority of your time?

If you can get permission you might do the shinobi institute of performance analysis as part of this series as I think it would pretty well

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* Gaara could do partial transformation easily because he didn't have the normal cloaks to work through *

Comma after "easily".

* The Oodama Rasengan, which was essentially a larger version of it which had a lot of destructive power that was released on impact.*

Comma after "it".

* Some of the best ones included modified storage seals which he so that when he unsealed what was within, it would shoot out like a canon*

Comma after "seals" and missing word after the first "he". It's probably "altered".

* Yuki knew that Naruto would be getting some once they got a break for sleep with that one*

Comma after "some".

* He had made the seal while he was trying to find a way to grant chakra to the people here.*

Comma after "seal".

* The old man had apparently lost any single chance he would have of peeping on women to find material for his books because Hinata would always kick his butt whenever he tried.*

Delete the "single", it's superfluous.
Missing word: "would have had".
Comma after "books".

* A young girl who had been taken by Orochimaru some time*

Comma after "girl".

* Karin had done the same thing when she learned she had a blood relative who was still alive*

Comma's after "thing" and "relative".

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Side note. You could ask TheBeardedOne if you could do a reading on one if his Naruto stories.

From what I recall they're all done. So no fear if an abandoned story.

In addition, one is a Sasuke redemption story. Non jackass Sasuke, which might be a nice change of pace.

Heck, he's even managed a redeemed Danzo. And it's believable too.

hello, well i just wanted to tell you that i think that you should read the Naruto Master of Jiongu. it starts out somewhat light and gets more complicated as the story goes on.