| Reviews for The Unthinkable |
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   apls79 chapter 21 . 7/13 I really hope this story is not abandoned. It is a really good story. |
| sahsha.adamthwaite chapter 8 . 9/2/2019 Excellent story so far! I gather from the grammatical errors that English isn't your first language. Might I suggest having a friend who's mother tongue is English proof read your chapters before you post them. You could also have them explain those errors to you as well in order to better your writing skills. I look forward to reading more! |
| Violet97mc chapter 1 . 2/24/2019 I’m so excited for this |
| apls79 chapter 21 . 11/29/2018 I am loving this story. Also am quite impressed with your mastery of the English language as I know Spanish is your mother tongue. I look forward to seeing the conclusion to this. |
| creativesm75 chapter 21 . 10/18/2018 great chapter! |
| BratGirl1983 chapter 21 . 10/14/2018 I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update. |
| creativesm75 chapter 20 . 7/13/2018 nice |
| Ender-Girl chapter 20 . 7/10/2018 Great chapter can't wait to see how it ends |
| JayBat chapter 20 . 7/9/2018 I love the way you write Kragkor! That elf is *fierce*. :-) Looking forward to your next, take care. |
| JayBat chapter 19 . 7/9/2018 I missed this update! Thank you, and here is a wish for a much quieter hurricane season this year. |
| Son of Whitebeard chapter 20 . 7/9/2018 good seeing Dobby's intereactionm |
| creativesm75 chapter 19 . 7/6/2018 cool |
| Violet97mc chapter 1 . 7/6/2018 Sounds amazing! |
| Shadow9042 chapter 19 . 5/10/2018 I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! |
| Ladybug chapter 19 . 4/22/2018 Awesome story please upgrade soon... |
