Thanks for some nice Rachel and Tom romance as well as family bonding. Not as much of it out here as there is for my other favorite ship on another show, so finding writers for them is always much appreciated.

what a great chapter. please let there be more...

I enjoyed this, sorry to see it end.

Lovely chapter! I love how patient Tom is being, giving Rachel time to get used to being a couple, before they become parents. Reassuring her when Sasha arrived unexpectedly was a good move, but think Checkmate goes to Rachel - making love to Tom, letting him know she wants him that way, puts her "I love you"into action.

Love your story and look forward to more!

great chapter. thanks for the update:)

Nice update, glad they're communicating, being honest, etc. Very good with characterization. Keep it up.

I loved Rachel's explanation of her relationship with their dad to Sam & Ashley - how they're all connected. Its such a simple explanation but it works - hopefully Tom & Rachel will be able to find their balance in their developing relationship, prefferably before their baby arrives!

Great story, keep up with the good work!

That was a wonderful chapter. So happy that you are back. Thank you so much for writing about Tom/Rachel. I really miss them on the show. Looking forward to the next chapter.

It was so beautiful! I can't wait to read more! So glad you're back!

Just finished the last two update. Really enjoyed them, look forward to more.

Wow! Tom finally admitted his love for Rachel and they have a little bun in the oven now! I am so excited for the next chapter and see how they will move as a family now. So looking forward to reading the next chapter. Love this!

Interesting chapter! Understandable that the children would love Rachel but Tom would be terrified to admit it for fear of loosing her again. Maybe now they have a reason (a baby), they can change that (saying I love you is a good start!)

hope you update soon