Reviews for Avenger-sama
Hot4Sas chapter 3 . 6/17
Loved Sasuke confessing to Naruto he's getting bored. Love Naruto really reflecting on Sasuke, the (crazy) night, and not knowing him. Hahaha loved the "Not so tired that I wouldn't mind getting a little action." UGH why is Sasuke so sexy... oh my god. I loved this so much. It's all I can think about. I also really really liked that, even though deep down he didn’t mind, Sasuke wanted Naruto to top. I have a thing for gay/bi men being flexible and masculine and wanting it either way. And I loved that Sasuke wasn’t seducing Naruto to try make him give up his ass, which TENDS TO be the case. In this case it was like, making him want him to be inside of him. Hot!

Love how Sasuke seemed to want Naruto to reassure him he would miss him, and how Sasuke wanted to give him his phone (and trusting Naruto would message him). I love it wasn't some angsty stuff, that they both wanted it and enjoyed it and well, they can keep in touch.
Of course, it reminded me of LIT, but this ending is definitely more neutral and cheerful even… but they could be together just one night. And well, LOVED that in this case Naruto was a fan... So I can only IMAGINE the thrill of hanging out and HAVING SEX with your idol... I don't know... I love moody/existential Sasukes, but I loved loved loved this flirty Sasuke, who seemed a little bit more outgoing (at least with Naruto/his flings). Oh and even though it's not relevant to the story, I really like that we don't know anything about Sasuke; how he really lives, how often he does this, if he does this with fans…
I'll definitely read it over and over again.

You know? For some reason, it reminded me of Hindsight, the writing style I mean. Obviously, it's you... but even though I've read some of your fics, one after the other (especially the old ones), it had never happened to me before. Something about the fast pace (mmm, I felt them more fast-paced than some one-shots, even, but not less enjoyable!) and "less" descriptive? Not as focused on the inner world. I admire you even more now… Knowing how you can control the whole thing, the plot, the descriptions and characters, the tone so well. I’m assuming it’s intentional, though. It’s refreshing to still “find you” in your different stories, while they also vary in their structure. However, back then, I also remember thinking that there was something in Sometime Around Midnight and Out of My Hands that made them similar in structure (you were updating them around the same time). Oh well.

Thank you Raz!
Hot4Sas chapter 2 . 6/17
I love Sai! Everything he said and how he noticed that there was something going on between them. Again, I. LOVE. FLIRTY. SASUKE. Naruto is so into him too! Even if he had never considered it before. But... I also love that he didn't just jump into bed with him. I almost fainted when Sasuke said he wanted to seduce him… Omg "his presence was larger than life for him", WOW. Haha what a fucking flirt, totally. I just loved their chemistry and conversation and Sasuke wanting to go out with Naruto like, even if he wanted to seduce him (and make him drink) he still went out of his way to do it (meet Naruto's friends). And even Sasuke suggesting a threesome! That desperate huh? Love it. I'm also disappointed Sasuke didn't get to sing the song... But I just really like that they went out with Naruto’s friends. It’s really considerate of Sasuke… Not just a horny singer who wants someone without caring at all for them. Haha loved that Naruto had to roll down the window because of the "private performance". Confident and sure. Love that in Sasuke (first kiss). Whoa I didn't like the joke about Itachi but I Loved that Sasuke took it as that, a joke, and didn't lose any of his confidence (cause he's sexy and hot as hell and knows Naruto loves him in a way, as his idol).
Hot4Sas chapter 1 . 6/17
OMG Raz this was SO GOOD and FUN and SEXY to read. I couldn't stop grinning like and idiot and laughing out loud…

Haha still wondering what "lose half his virginity" even means. Love Naruto’s dialogue with Sai! And their friendship! And Naruto watching every interview LMAO. Loved the "feeling a little emasculated" and "so even women can be sexist", hell yeah. Omg I can FEEL Naruto's excitement. I've never been to a concert but the way you described it gave me a pretty good idea of it. I would totally pass out in his place. I loved the "what people didn't understand about Avenger-sama..." the expert! “Heaven's light and trumpets”! Ahaha I love Naruto being such a huge fan! "Just being in the same room as him would've made his freaking life" I LOVE THAT HE GOT EVEN MORE THAN THAT I loved how you mentioned that he was so excited that he considered going to the restroom. Like, it’s no normal and obvious but not talked about? And the way you described Sasuke's style as a dark Adele Taylor Swift.

Loved Naruto dropping the water bottle out of astonishmeeeeent AND SASUKE’S TSHIRT. OMG when he was one person away my heart almost came out of my mouth. HAHAHA practicing this moment in the mirror for a week! Hahah after pointing at the t-shirt Naruto seemed so gay, and the $20 comment… I just loved them meeting... I. LOVE. FLIRTY. SASUKE. Wow, why did Naruto reach such a conclusion so quickly? (Sasuke making fun of him) and the assuming that well yeah, because he was flirting with the trio of women it was confirmed? After he himself thought that "someone like Sasuke" probably wouldn't get tired of that kind of lifestyle? The hell Naruto? Was he jealous? Did he want to be special? I wonder how exactly Naruto imagined "the Avenger-sama" to be? Then he wondered how many women he would take home. But I guess it makes sense since that girl from before assumed he was there with his girlfriend, and then Hinata’s friend was a bitch to him too so he’s kind of projecting the assumptions.

I loved the "Naruto would've known his voice anywhere". Loved that Sasuke noticed Naruto was a nice guy! WAIT, I JUST NOTICED "I'm picky about what I use" So he's also picky with people right?! Ahahah taking care of Sasuke felt like "guarding a national treasure". I totally sound like a fangirl too… Oh well. This was too good to be true. I would totally DIE if Sasuke notices me.
kcisjohan chapter 3 . 5/9/2019
I really enjoyed Sasuke in this story. Not all bastard and brooding all the time with a nice sense of humor.
MistressofFiction chapter 1 . 8/2/2018
Idk but this story reminded me of "Dead-Last" or maybe that story reminded me of this? Either way i loved all your stories, this one wasn't different i loved this too! . i cracked up at tbe double deuce reference xD
Lily chapter 3 . 7/19/2018
That was really good
Lily chapter 1 . 7/19/2018
This I should amazing!
Cafrye chapter 3 . 7/3/2018
great story, i wish there was more but can understand why there is not.
temarichanx chapter 1 . 3/15/2018
Ohh lovve it
Aishirii chapter 1 . 2/6/2018
Oh my was that a Lost in Translation reference?...God I love that story, haven't read it in a while, I just remember crying so much when reading it but it's definitely one of my favorites from you, so beautifully written. But this one is so much fun, Naruto is such a cutie and loved his interaction with Hinata. I just love the idea of Sasuke loving "himself" in another band. xD Oh those Valley of the End lyrics had me choking up, gorgeous...very nice reference to the original story. 3 :')
The Unapologetic chapter 3 . 10/27/2017
That was great! Am I the only one who laughed at the No sequel part. I just find that so halrious lol, maybe because I'm tired but still this was a great story.
KuroxKurage chapter 3 . 10/9/2017
My heart broke a little when I read, "no sequel." I was internally begging for at least a sort of epilogue chapter where maybe Naruto's song came out on the radio or they meet up again. Regardless, this story was so great, you never cease to amaze me with your writing. The characters are always so unique, so real, and so alive, it's incredible. You always have a way of turning what may not have been the most unique plot into a perfect, one-of-a-kind story, and this is no exception. Thank you so much for being so great.
victimofmywoes chapter 3 . 9/2/2017
I can live without the sequel but what really bugs me is how is/was Naruto half virgin?!
Momo chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
Aside from ISOC ( and the all universe) this one is my favourite; Sasuke is glorious and so sexy every time I read the story I'm jealous of Naruto ahah and Naruto is sweet and charming, bless. Sai also cracks me up in this one, I find his chara very funny. I think they will see each other again, sooner than later, and maybe it'll turn into something more serious, ah that would be nice. I think Naruto could have a good influence on Sasuke and his desire to do something new and different. Thank you for this little story and that gem of a t-shirt ahah
QueenUchiha chapter 1 . 7/29/2017
This was a very nice read
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