Interesting, looking forward to more

please update soon

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This is quite interesting. Well done! I hope it continues.

Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Are you going to complete this fic or is it a abandoned?

Yeah look where Tommy landed Thea! If you don't listen to the asshole you'll end up stranded at a deserted island!

Look, sure you and me? We know that's true because Malcolm is crazy. Reeeaaaaal crazy at that. The rest though? They don't know that so what exactly "would end up happening" to Thea? She would get a social life and what? Olivers grades were good before the boat went under and so were Tommys. Laurels rethoric here is frankly laughable and should be deleted from the story because it's shit.

Regarding the tattoo, what tatoo parlour? As long as you have the ink and a needle you can do it yourself. Just bullshit and tell Thea that they found a plant they could make ink of and decided to get tattooed. Or that they did it secretly? Theas big "ohhh they are busted reveal" doesn't make much sense so I really hope you aren't planing to use it.

Also, the fact that neither of Oliver or Tommy has killed / told Malcolm to fuck off by now is starting to get... unrealistic. First they should have snapped at that controlling dick and then if he tries making their lives harder? Well tell Waller, kill him and make Waller help you hide the body. Problem solved!

And... FeFe is being bossy again. Ew. Not to mention negligent, making her computer folders so obvious

Oliver then ran out of Felicity's office. The girl was even worse than any of the others! Entitled, a security risk (with her babbling), and far too awkward for any real work!

This really felt like Malcolm this chapter, except a minor hiccup when he started to shout in rage.

Can't wait to find out if his asset shall be the calculating Clock King, psycho Shrapnel, or the bi-polar evil Overwatch!

Malcolm seemed different. Here, he seems rather brutish, and in the series he was manipulative and slightly sadistically sarcastic. The image in my head I'm getting is Hugh Jackman (who looks a bit more like the Malcolm from the comics). This new Malcolm should shape up to be more brutal. Thumbs up!

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and thanks for the update!
it has been a while, and i was afraid i'd be lost where the story was, but i remembered it quite well as i read through. very nice job!

Oliver was framed. There's a shocker. The sooner Malcolm dies, the sooner I'll be happy. I wanted to kill him for that stunt with Thea. And what did Ted Grant ever do to warrant that psycho's wrath? And what leverage does he have on Quentin? And will Tommy end up becoming Prometheus?

Enjoyed it can't wait for the next chapter.