| Reviews for Prime of the Elemental Nations (on hold) |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 5/18 Take your time it will come to you just relax and take it easy |
 kristinalprime23 chapter 10 . 5/10 may i suggest that you add some scenes with the decepticons and team prime on earth, then team prime receiving optimus's message from his new home. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/28 he should go to earth or cybertron |
| DonPJuan chapter 10 . 3/27 eh update when you can it's your fic not ours so work at your own pace. |
| R reyes chapter 10 . 3/27 hmmmmnnn my advice see the series of both naruto and transformers those that give you the inspiration to write them and also look for storys too some from gundam or big oh even some videos from the games or from other from scifi genre. also look for music that motivates you rock or trance synthwave or look for mangas with mecha genre. there is one that a guy from a normal world die and is reborn on a world they have giants knight suits to fight monsters. also there are some story here about evangelion and godzilla or attack on titan see if those help or just watch movies of ether mecha or scifi. though thats my opinion it did work for me when i wrote one on a note book in class before the hole thing with the virus. hero academia and 0079 gundam origin izuku being amuro after neing seend to that world by my oc jumper his quirk that allow him to jump between demensions when he see izuku being seend to a dangerous portal by kurogiri. jumper save him but izuku is regressed to that of a 5 year old and hit his head and tem wife found him. since she lost amuro during her pregnancy... |
| zero fullbuster chapter 10 . 3/27 how about bashing of everyone in the leaf and megatron and his alias become friends this optimus prime and his group. |
| Ryu wolf chapter 10 . 3/27 Maybe Kushina and hikari can go on a mission to find prime and choose to to stay with him (hikari) |
| PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 10 . 3/27 Oh I have an idea :) |
| dresden12 chapter 10 . 3/27 Well either next chapter or the one after needs to have prime meet with Mei terumi and most likely a chapter for the other kages learning about how the civil war ended. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/7 Great story so far can't wait to read more:-D |
| Halo guy 414 chapter 1 . 10/15/2019 Is everything okay for the prime of the Elemental Nations I like to know what happens next |
| avjuan37 chapter 9 . 9/9/2019 please make more chapters |
| BijuuX chapter 9 . 7/2/2019 Have Options team come to the elemental nations would be a very interesting twist and a major shock to everyone |
| BijuuX chapter 9 . 7/1/2019 This is cool I love this so much and it is great |
| Genzexal chapter 6 . 5/12/2019 I like the premise but personally i feel that you don’t make it easy to understand what mode he’s in. |
