I really liked these two bones pov Kara and Lena I preferred this one but must say that I love Lena c is a fascinating character. I agree with you there is something that happened in this episode crazy alchemy and we do not ship the couple for nothing that it intensifies over time to become ambiguous ... good my English being bad I'm sorry for the Yoda langage mode

Your fan fic was pretty cool ! I like being in lena's mind for once and feel what she feel's. She is really a complexe character. We can feel it through your fic. Thank's for this moment.

Wow. I'm so glad I've stumbled onto your writing. Beautifully crafted, perfectly captures Lena and Kara... I'm off to read more.

I'm so glad there is a companion piece! Soo good!

It's okay. It's hard not to be obsessed with Katie McGrath and Melissa Benoist on screen at the same time. The chemistry is out of this world. I will be lmao when the writers and producers start to force the little hobbit onto Lena and the audience ignores it like the invisible scenes that never were. We totally need you and other lena\kara writers to do justice to these two stunning women. Never stop writing for them.

I really hope you keep writing stuff like this, it's one of the best works I've ever read :)

This was a full on character study and it's wonderful! Loved this!

I really like this. I'd love to see your perspective with Lena on some of the other episodes as well.

Awwwww so cute. Please write more!

so well written, thank you! i love the opposition of these two and you've got a genuine picture of Lena's mind... would like to read Kara's side, but only in the sense that it would be a complete picture, i think Lena is much richer a character to explore

Great story