Loved the story, excellent job!

what do you mean by 7stone 8 pounds?

for me it's not about the gift cards or notepadsit's about the pensI have ballpoint pens and gel pens in many, many different colors

why would she call him Edward MCH? if his last name is Masen-Cullen then what is the H for?

Such a great story! Thank you!

Yes! I was hoping Mr. Hyphenated would make an appearance at dinner with the 'rents!

So is the Detective Constable Jess Stanley the same Jessica Stanley that lives in the end cul de sac with Mike Newton and Eric Yorkie?

Thank goodness the mess with Alice didn't last long!

Awe I was rooting for Jasper but Edward and Bella are just so adorable!

This is wonderful! Loving the date with EdwardI've always called seagulls rats with wings!

I just wonder if we will ever hear from Jacob again...maybe give Bella some much needed closure?

It's odd, this is the first story I've read where they live in the UK, from the UK, and speak accordingly. Usually it's the speak, but the normal Bella from Arizona/Washington thing. But with this being AH, I'm pleasantly happy about the turn of events. It's intriguing and is taking some time to get used to, but I really like it.

I can totally picture Bella's head rocketing back and forth between these two like a tennis ball as they argue, very rudely in her home! Hilarious! But now we're getting somewhere! Woohoo!

Haha she screams so much! It's so funny!

love the story, especially the little quirks with British English vs American English. Thank God for
google when I had no idea what some of the words were about.
Best of luck on your new story and Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy Boxing Day, lol.