Could you please update some time soon.

This is interesting but is it still being written?

I LOVE IT! I need more! MOOOOOORRRREEEEEE! Please?

Update as soon as you can please.

Love it!

good story so far

I love it. Will you continue this tale or taking a short break?

Great chapter i have to say. I like your Grievous and I think you are right about him being more of a warrior than a savage. He would od much better if he had a decent army to lead instead of stupid droids. I can't wait to see how far Kit will drag Naruto into Jedi stuff lol.

Interesting beginning, even if a bit odd and maybe lacking in detail, but beginnings are hard. This looks like it has potential and you should really continue

Even if Naruto is a shinobi, I didn't like that he broke a warrior's duel like that. I hope in the future that they fight in another warrior's duel and the Naruto doesn't break it.

i loved the silly bit with the lightsaber, it was a nice, light, touch of comedy.

This chapter was great and I liked the conservation that Naruto and grievous had when Naruto was trying to find the right lightsaber especially the beginning part of that conservation.

hope to read more.

that's feelsbadman. I feel for the robot man.

Damn, poor Grievous.