Say, about Excalibur arc. It might be a chance for you to introduce the counterpart of Artoria in DxD world using Saber card, it could become an arc that shows that Shirou is not the only one fused with class cards.

Please update

I Hate Tsubaki

So hungry.

Update this shit soon man shits good as fuck

Yep, I'm done. It's a well written story, the characters aren't 2D and the grammar is amazing but I came for a badass shirou crossover and instead I got this. Not my cup of tea, best of luck with your story though.

This was a good conclusion to this arc. Please keep up the good work!

It going to be a harem?

First of all an amazing story.
Amazing character development and story building.
But the story gets a little unrealistic when you try to force comedy in the middle of the battle at least for me.
I’m interested to see how shirou will progress and I’m very pleased how his and archers mindset merging is subtle yet very impactful to the story itself.
I want to see the moment when shirou can’t save everyone and how it affect him.
Keep up the good work

The more I read this, the more I love it! Great job! Can’t wait for more

... So he's kind of sort of maybe in Sona's peerage? Well, let's hope not, Sona and her group are kinda boring.

This was FANTASTIC. You've really come along as a writer and I believe you should be proud of yourself. I know this comment is a long time coming, but your chapter was so good I literally couldn't stop re-reading it over and over. You've done great work, and I would like to congratulate you on finally reaching the canon story of DxD. With all the world building you've done I'm sure the story would be great. I do have a couple ideas I would be interested to pitch to you but that's something for a different message altogether. On another note I'm sorry to hear about all the difficulty you've recently been having thanks to the Quarantine and it's unfortunate affects on your college and work. I want you to know that your not the only one, its happening to all of us, including me. The fact that you still attempt to contribute to this story feels me with great respect for you. I know that things are going to be tough for a while but I want you to know that me and all the people who love to read your stories are rooting for you, and we understand if you need time to focus on your personal life, because no matter WHAT that is the most important, especially now. I hope your doing all right and I wish you the best. Thank you for giving me this chapter when I needed to enjoy something. I hope you make it through this tough time with pride in your heart.
P.S. Congrats on Waver man :)

You understand that if he is Human the boy must break ties forever with Sona, and forbidden to associate with Devils and the Underworld.

Humans are forbidden to live, and associate them with them unless they are reincarnated.

Do you plan what you write or do you just write random shit that comes to your mind? You have this overarching plot that is plain ridiculous, sona, the sister of a satan is kidnapped and brainwashed by a scorned devil? Do you realize how logic defying that is? All that just to make sona marry him? Whatever, I accepted that plot line, but now comes this! A random, no name queen of a no name devil has a weapon that can rewind time? WHAT THE FUCK? How high were you when you wrote this shit?
Whatever, I'm done reading this impulsive mess of a fic.

Nice!
Good to know that in this fic, nobody dies: they only pass out at most! That's great! I, as an adult reader, would not be able to emotionally handle the fictional death of fictional characters. In cas you can't tell, I'm being sarcastic. Reading shit like this is so fucking annoying. You have these bad guys who are trying their best to kill sona's peerage, but all they do is knock them out. Especially the way you write it: 'and then he passed out' Honestly that's just pathetic. And don't get me started on shirou sparing the guy. Dumbest shit I've ever read.

Unless, of course, I got that all wrong and this fic is rated K? A quick scroll to the top tells me otherwise.
GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER