ugh I really hate to be a damn nuisance but I work with radios in the military and am well trained when it comes to the vocab and I just wanted to give you a fun fact.

the term "Over" means you are done talking and are expecting an answer. So Negan's use of it was correct, however, the term "Out" means you are done talking and are NOT expecting a reply. The guy that responded should have said out. The 2 terms are never to be used together like in the movies as it would make no damn sense. lol I apologize for the rambling, not telling you to change it or anything just liked to share knowledge. love the story so far!

Just made it through Rear Window and started this one. Love Kayla (and its total not cause MY name is Cayla wink, wink, nudge, nudge). I never thought of Kayla in the image of Octavia from The 100 BUT I LOVE IT. In my mind, she’s a total badass and I love seeing her come to life in your story thus far. Well done on Rear Window! And looking forward to this one!

Oh my. Compared to other ocs Kay is something else, wonderfully vibrant and full of life. She experienced her share of loss and trauma and while she was changed by it she's not taking it quietly like many other ocs. She will fight even if it brings distrust and hostility from Ricks's group. She's assholish without being overdone and she's believable. I can see an emotional real life person reacting like that. Well done.

Raises hand, waving frantically! Me me me me. So pissed at Rick for that sh*t. And they are taking her to Hilltop and I'm betting Rick is going to try and keep her there or tell her Negan is dead.

Loved this. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Oh. My. God!

I laughed so hard I cried when I read about Eugene and Captain ‘Merica comment! That was PRICELESS, thank you!

Love the work,

~B.

I like Kayla, she's flawed in a very realistic way. Her character reminds me of Shane so I've got to give you credit. A few chapters in, but I can tell this is going to be a story that I'll enjoy.

I really...really dislike the main character. She's very...unlikeable? Maybe you made her that way on purpose and she'll get better? I'm going to continue reading cause I want a good Negan story. Let's see how this goes.

OMGGGG THE PLANET STINKEYEEE OMGGG IM ROLLING YESSSSSS xDD

Wow, this story was amazing. I just binged this in 24 hours so I'm still kind of processing everything. Needless to say you have a gift for writing. This piece had a beautifully interwoven story line. And while having a fantastic plot, you were able to develop the characters beautifully. I really can't give you enough praise for this one. You nailed Negan's character. His flaws, his strengths, his humor. I loved Kayla as well. She was able to be a badass while still having vulnerabilities. Every chapter brought out an emotion within me. I want to say thank you for sharing you writing with everyone! I am looking very forward to the sequel!

Wonderful story and I love the character. Thank you for sharing it.

i loved this story so much, when will the sequel be published?

You did the impossible. You wrote a story that made me like Negan. Loved your OC too. Great job!

I am head over heels with this story. I want my own Negan, gruff asshole and all. PLEASE I beg you, start that sequel!

I cant wait for the sequel!