Reviews for Spoonful of Sugar |
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Hillmorrr chapter 9 . 7/15 A very interesting plot, and also well written. I liked your use of characters, both your own, and some of the under-utilized in the Harry Potter Brooks. Thanks for sharing! |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/19/2019 This is so freaking cool. I've not read a situation like this before. I love it |
Neakco chapter 5 . 11/9/2018 Came for the relationship was hit with a siege and decided this fanfic is amazing! |
AngelDragon1976 chapter 9 . 11/3/2018 Wow. I love this story. Definitely a different spin on SS/HG. Loved every word. |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/1/2018 This is singlehandedly one of the best as/hg fanfic I've ever read. Your descriptions and knowledge of political going inside is superb. |
WINTER.PIXIE.X3 chapter 9 . 12/4/2017 I loved every bit of the story! |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/11/2017 I really, really want to read "Shit McGonagall Dealt With". |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/11/2017 Shouldn't Hermione and Blaise be granted a potions mastery given all her work before classes even resumed? These "students" seem more like The Ministry than...students. I get that you wanted to ramp up the pace, but doing so by skipping vital information isn't a great idea. The whole scene about Flume and marketing the product and hiring someone else? Wait...what? More words there would have been a tremendous help because in the end it was just a confusing garble. And Hermione and Severus went from vague conversation to swapping bodily fluids with pretty much no detail as to how their relationship progressed. There's a huge difference between leaving mysteries for the reader to solve as they read and skipping over facts that should have been written to the point that the story becomes disjointed and annoying. |
Lucyole chapter 9 . 6/30/2017 Very good Story funny and interesting. |
Aishiteru Chibi Ichi chapter 9 . 6/25/2017 This is a really unique take on a post-hogwarts story and I loved it! Great writing and amazing humor made it even better! |
pianomouse chapter 9 . 5/31/2017 This has been a joy to read, I loved every moment. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. |
whiteartsnun chapter 9 . 5/30/2017 Who's Jonas? Lovely plot solutions! :D logical yet fantastic epilogue :D |
Dianne9577 chapter 9 . 4/22/2017 I love it. Would love to see a sequel and the Ministers world tour. Great idea well executed! |
Lioness1988 chapter 9 . 4/13/2017 Wonderful. Throughly enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing it. |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/27/2017 A lovely, complex story! I enjoyed it greatly. Thank you for sharing! |